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Jessica(HOL15-23july
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Terrifying
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Posted on
2014-09-01 07:29:26
Hi there. This thread is about my art. If you want to critique or review my work please do I really am grateful for the comments.
All who give me critique will be put into a raffle and the winner gets a free Icon art piece.

The threads



ANIMAL ICONS

Realistic lion eyes

Things i already have heard or know


- You should use gimp/paint tool sai ect... (I cant download them because my computer has the trojan virus were it gives me fake error messages.)

I CAN ASSURE YOU


-This is my own work (I have had alot of problems with people thinking that i have copied people or stock images. I used to do that but then i found out that was art theft and i havent done it since)

- I have deviant art and all work on there is MINE (Clicky)

Please


- Don't be too harsh to me
- Include the picture that your Critiquing or reviewing.




Critique form



Piece reference:
What was good about it?
What could i improve?
How much would you price it at?
Would you buy it?


Review form



Piece reference:
What was good about it?
What could i improve?
Did i give you good service?
Did i give you any hassle?
Was it what you expected?
Would you buy from me again?



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Edited on 01/09/14 by Jessica(Come and stomp) (#30659)

Micah 🌈 (#29140)

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Posted on
2014-09-01 10:01:15
I have a good art program you can use, and its online, free, and easy to figure out. :3 SumoPaint



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Edited on 01/09/14 by Milo -Remaking account- (#29140)

Jessica(HOL15-23july
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Posted on
2014-09-01 10:04:54
Thank you so much. I will take a look soon. :3



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Micah 🌈 (#29140)

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Posted on
2014-09-01 10:15:13
^^ Glad I could help! <3



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Stevie [🌶#HC🌶] (#37894)

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Posted on
2014-09-02 01:06:02
Critique
Piece reference: wolf
What was good about it? Realistic design-side design
What could i improve? Eyes
How much would you price it at? (small) With eyes, 300sb (large) With eyes, 500sb
Would you buy it? If they had eyes-YES!
Review
Coming soon...




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miasma (#22325)

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Posted on
2014-09-02 02:11:16
Piece reference: Wolf
What was good about it? It's so cute! I love it!
What could i improve? Well, you could try a thinner and softer brush, and look at some anatomy. (not only for wolves, but for the other animals)
How much would you price it at? 200-600SB! Depends of you and the size!
Would you buy it? YES!



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Mots - RP Loved🏒 (#5378)

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Posted on
2014-09-02 02:18:07
Piece reference: Wolf
What was good about it? The ears
What could i improve? Muzzle, neck. And remove the teeth. Wolves of today and even the dire wolf did not have fangs like a sabertooth cat. If you wanted to show teeth, it could be snarling or yawning. Or howling, depending on angle.
How much would you price it at? Right now, maybe 200 SB
Would you buy it? Not right now, no.

If that was harsh, I apologize. I tried to be nice about it.



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Omniscient (#40058)

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Posted on
2014-09-02 05:23:53
Piece reference:Animal Icons
What was good about it? I Like it...It's usually something you wouldn't See really. Especially the Horse Icon. I Like it very much! In a way it's Kind of Unique. Some people wouldn't Bother with Transforming your Lion to look like a Horse in Art or something. But, Anyways. I like it.
What could i improve? If you can, Add some more/Different Icons? That way People can have more Choices i guess?
How much would you price it at? I think all the prices You had are Reasonable~
Would you buy it? Yes!

This is the Honest to God Truth. I like the Icons/Art you do :)



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Jessica(HOL15-23july
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Posted on
2014-09-02 06:10:11
@Duck- Thanks to you, i pushed myself to do the eyes and it worked.

@Rahla- Why dont you order one? The wolf is free.

@Motsumi- Thanks for the honesty and also the teeth are for a bit more goofy cuteness.

@Shadow- I know you do hun :3 thanks for your support.



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Edited on 02/09/14 by Jessica(Come and stomp) (#30659)

Carstella (#2645)

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Posted on
2014-09-02 07:24:13
Piece reference: Wolf
What was good about it? Everything! It looks wonderful, and your art is very affordable!
What could i improve? Hmm, I agree with Shadow. You should do more icons! You are a WONDERFUL artist.
Did i give you good service? Yes, extremely good service.
Did i give you any hassle? No.
Was it what you expected? Even better!
Would you buy from me again? You shall see me soon *Hoards silver beetles*
Your art is wonderful!



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Jessica(HOL15-23july
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Posted on
2014-09-03 01:43:45
ANIMAL ICONS- Request

Here you go Kittykat and all who wanted MORE. You can now request icons.



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Cheeky (#7812)

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Posted on
2014-09-11 06:02:00
In general for all your art I would first sketch what you're drawing.
Make a layer and with a light colored, slightly thick brush sketch out what you are drawing, and then make a layer over it and with a smaller, black pencil add your details.
Once you are all done, make a third layer and put the final lines on it.

What I see is your lines are very thick and shaky in some places, and very straight in some places, too.
Use a smaller brush and use a stabilizer if the program you use has it.

I would also study anatomy of what you're drawing. Try to break each piece up into shapes. Animal heads, for example, are usually either round or box like - use a circle or square depending on which it is and then look at what the snout is like and make a shape for it, too.

Oh, and regarding hair, like the horses mane and such:
Instead of having it in one huge clump, make smaller sections.
You can use references to find out how the hair falls. Horse hair isn't one huge clump. Most hair isn't a huge clump.

And the final thing I see, which is about coloring:
I would color your pieces by hand, instead of using the paint bucket/fill tool. When you use those tools, it creates white spots all over the drawing and it doesn't look good.
Also, if you use the spray tool, I would go back and smoothen it out.



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Jessica(HOL15-23july
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Posted on
2014-09-11 06:30:52
Ok thanks for your help. :3



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🔥 Wildfire 🔥 (#36595)


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Posted on
2014-09-19 08:54:56
The animation eye is amazing!! I would just make the animation eye a little faster when blinking :D



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Jessica(HOL15-23july
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Posted on
2014-09-19 08:58:14
WillI was thinking that. I will do it to peoples requests



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🐾 Yeen (#36951)

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Posted on
2014-09-20 01:12:45
Piece reference: Wolf
What was good about it? It was cute, but I love almost all art.
What could i improve? Anatomy. Like Motsumi said, remove the teeth. A dire wolf wouldn't have the fangs of a sabertooth cat, and a wolf of today wouldn't have its teeth out like that. The picture itself lacks realism. You should also make lines visible on darker pieces with black fur. Making the lines gray, however would only be for darker pieces.
How much would you price it at? Eh. 100-200 SB small icon free again until anatomy improves.
Would you buy it? I'm not sure. I may, but I may not. If the anatomy improves, of course!



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