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Jessica(HOL15-23july ) (#30659) Terrifying View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-06 07:34:13 |
Hello I am so proud of myself and have drawn a lion in the style of a MLP. I inspired myself with this one. Note If enough people like it, I will transfer it to Digital so people can have it in their dens. I want your opinions. -Do not use this -Its all MINE -UPDATE- Form Whats good? What could be improved? Would you buy it? How much? 0 players like this post! Like? Edited on 07/01/15 by Jessica (#30659) |
{Leaving} (#43698)
View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-06 07:38:16 |
Whats good? I like the pose of the lioness and how neat the lines are What could be improved? Erm, I can't find anything! :) Would you buy it? Yep How much? Depends how good your coloring skills are, but I rarely pay more than 350SB for chibi art, but it's 100% up to you what you want to price it :D 0 players like this post! Like? Edited on 06/01/15 by Alaric (Main) (#43698) |
Jessica(HOL15-23july ) (#30659) Terrifying View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-06 07:38:59 |
IllusionLion (#28866)
Scourge of Lions View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-06 07:42:56 |
Whats good? I like how you're not afraid to post this. I usually get nervous and chicken out when asking for opinions on my art :) And the paws in the art are very cute. What could be improved? The anatomy, body shape, and way of fur (there's quite an easy trick for soft-looking fur - PM me if you'd like) Would you buy it? No, sorry. :c I rarely buy chibi, especially when simply done. I like detailed chibi :P How much? I'm terrible at pricing, my apologies. 0 players like this post! Like? Edited on 06/01/15 by Illusion (#28866) |
Jessica(HOL15-23july ) (#30659) Terrifying View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-06 07:44:49 |
IllusionLion (#28866)
Scourge of Lions View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-06 07:45:51 |
Hyena•Queen (#39934)
Merciful View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-06 20:27:56 |
Whats good? All of it :D What could be improved? nothing its perfect Would you buy it? Yep How much? I'm horrible at pricing 0 players like this post! Like? |
Kristall (#24826)
King of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-07 05:06:32 |
Whats good?Love the pose, and the fur is very cute. Also the head looks so cute, cause it's so fluffy. FLUFFY!!! :33333 What could be improved?Maybe you could fix the eyes just a bit. Maybe rotate them a bit if you know what I mean :P Would you buy it?I would c: How much?I'm terrible at pricing, so pelase don't make me answer this XD 0 players like this post! Like? |
Hell's Sovereign (#22210)
Deathlord of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-07 05:18:17 |
The lines look like they have too much 'fur' drawn, would be better to not add as many. Maybe have them more like at the elbows, tiny butt fluff, chest and maybe neck fluff, some cheek fluff. Not too much elsewhere, it just looks odd. The back legs also look like weird goat hooves to me. To be honest the head looks like a chibi mouse more than chibi lion, the mouth looks too pointed for a lion. Or a dog or something. As for buying it, no. I do not buy art in general then again, especially not chibi. Would prefer someone with better art if I did, since lots with cheap art. But I know a lot of other people would probably buy it, people always seem to like chibis even if they are not great. Price? 20-60 SB or something?? Uncertain. 0 players like this post! Like? |
Jessica(HOL15-23july ) (#30659) Terrifying View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-07 05:22:46 |
Kristall (#24826)
King of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-07 05:24:16 |
Jessica, I don't think that you should remove the fluff. It's a chibi so it looks really cute :3 But even if you remove it, it will look cute, so its your choice :P 0 players like this post! Like? |
Hell's Sovereign (#22210)
Deathlord of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-07 05:28:02 |
I have absolutely no idea how to do chibis at all but what I meant was something like this http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2015/007/f/7/lion_chib_by_demonsheir-d8cz6tk.png (quick sketch it took like 30 seconds, ignore the poor quality) Face is kinda more blunt, and paws are kinda more noticable? not just like a straight down line, I see that used in hooved chibis a lot. and less spikey looking fur, it looks kinda weird. Not sure if you planned for that, but Other examples https://33.media.tumblr.com/a98bf7de6822ccb1e5ed2c07086477c0/tumblr_mm2j3cJazv1qicu5jo1_1280.jpg http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/046/3/d/chibi_lion_by_dolphy-d39lst9.png 0 players like this post! Like? |
Jessica(HOL15-23july ) (#30659) Terrifying View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-07 06:14:14 |
Kristall (#24826)
King of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-07 06:28:03 |
Goldenleaf (#2677)
Prince of the Savannah View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-07 06:59:45 |
What's good? The ears are an OK shape. What could be improved? Anatomy, definitely. The back legs look a lot like hooves and the body isn't well proportioned (The chest is huge and the rear is tiny). The tail is also bent at weird angles. Also, the fur looks unnatural and spike-y, and for a lion it's a little long. Finally, the eye is at the wrong angle. Rotate it a little bit. Also, you should remember to include the tear ducts sometime. I know it's chibi but still. Would you buy it? No, I just don't really like chibi art in general. How much? If I were to sell it, I'd say maybe 100 to 200 SB...? 0 players like this post! Like? |
Jessica(HOL15-23july ) (#30659) Terrifying View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-01-07 07:01:17 |
Its a my little pony style one Btw. Thats why the bum is tiny, the feet look like hooves. 0 players like this post! Like? |
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