Posted by I need help! Red Lines needed :O

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2018-08-01 16:25:18
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Here is the lineart that I would love to get redlines or criticism on:
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Thank you for your help in advance! I really appreciate any help!! :D <3



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Edited on 07/07/19 @ 09:55:12 by 🐻Moose 🍄 (#83018)

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2018-08-08 17:26:41
This is pretty well drawn as is, but the legs are I little bit in accurate but they’re pretty common mistakes. I added a couple pictures of wolfs legs that in are in the same positions so,you can’t see what it looks like in real life. The arm was a bit uneven but it’s not a huge issue. This is my personal preference, but I recommend you draw body fur that flows more with the shape of the figure and see if you like that. I’ve found looks a little more realistic and guides the eye better. I wouldn’t take my advice as law though because I’m not a pro! Great art already, though! 👍

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Edited on 08/08/18 @ 20:12:14 by 🌱Wolfie🌱 (#60955)

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2018-08-08 17:32:47
@Wolfie
Thank you so much!
That really helps! <3



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2018-08-08 19:38:54
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It's always important to lay out basic shapes and forms before adding details. Make sure eyes, ears, limb length, etc, is all correct in proportion and shape so you can more easily change it later down the line of production. When drawing limbs, draw out the ENTIRE arm/leg so you know you get it all correct. You can erase the extra bits after you make sure it's all proper. Try to look up human torso anatomy and gesture drawing tutorials on youtube for anthros to get a better sense for how to sketch them out ♥

Hopefully this helps! ♥



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2018-08-09 09:09:11
@deertush
Woah thank you so much! That helps a ton! <3



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2018-11-18 09:45:13
ack one sec



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2018-11-18 09:50:46
Thank you :3
I just added the lined version. I know it is very rough, but I tried xD



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2018-11-18 09:55:42
im doing red lines based on the sketch, if you dont mind



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2018-11-18 09:56:16
I don't mind whatsoever! Any help is very much appreciated! I am trying to get better at drawing lions, so thank you very much! :D <3



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2018-11-18 09:56:24
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Edited on 18/11/18 @ 09:56:40 by WifiAddict69 {brimstone felis} (#154363)

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2018-11-18 09:59:12
Ahhh thank you so much! That really helps a ton! :D <3



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2018-11-18 10:01:07
yee. im the best at art so its not the best tho lol



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2018-11-18 10:01:58
Haha I feel! I have been practicing a lot, but it's always good to get other's opinions! It helps improve art! :D <3



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2018-11-18 10:02:32
oki!



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2018-11-18 13:06:04
I hope my chickenscratch is legible; in any case here it is. Includes some tips on angling and visibility :) I found a 3/4 view of a cat head that showed an almost identical angle to your image that helped with referencing as well as some other small details.

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Hope this helps ^.^

(The dashed blue line through the nose and snout is me figuring out the centerline of the head; sort of a guiding line I used when figuring out the nose because it seemed a tad off center to me. You can ignore it, for the most part ^.^)



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2018-11-18 13:38:55
Ahh thank you so much! That really does help a lot! I will see what I can do with all of your notes! :D <3
I didn't really think of looking up house cat references since it is meant to be a lioness(whoops maybe that is a bad thing xD), but that is a very similar pose! :O



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