Posted by -ADDED TO THE GAME-[ALL] Hire a Writer (please.) (+250)

Nyanunix (#11487)

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Posted on
2018-04-14 15:38:17
Pretty simple suggestion. I've noticed, as a writer, that Lioden's events are . . . Badly written. Not to be rude to whoever's doing it, but I'm not wrong; as someone who writes professionally it hurts my heart.

Other sites have paid writers that do dialogue, wiki pages, everything. I know because that's what I do. It's not as expensive as one might think and a big site like LD could afford it.

I think that there needs to be someone hired to write storylines for the events.

If you support, great, if you don't, whatever.



This suggestion has 559 supports and 43 NO supports.



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Bronzewing
[Storymode] (#213942)

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Posted on
2020-10-20 07:22:12
I would love to see some more character development and maybe some item descriptions being changed! This site has a strong style to it, and the more of that the better.

October is one of the biggest ones that needs fixing since it seems to be building up to such a big conflict- even with September being a leadup to it. But it feels unfinished and stagnates after novel 2?

There's a lot of stories and the like now, and they need some work! The events are my favorite part of this whole game, let's make them even better!



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Pomeranian (#219858)

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Posted on
2020-10-28 03:29:51
I have to agree here. The writing is meh...at best.



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(they/she (#211139)

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Posted on
2020-11-02 14:42:41
i dont wanna offend anyone but like support times 10



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Stefanie 🦌 (#218303)

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Posted on
2020-12-29 07:01:53
I don't see anything wrong with the storylines, but i still support.



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Ezgati~Crazy Panther
Lady~πŸ† (#28391)

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Posted on
2021-01-01 10:23:40
As someone, who loves creative writing, I cant agree enough.



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Shadow (Main) (#73284)

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Posted on
2021-01-01 10:31:48
I support this fully. I have been around since the first event was started years ago and now that it is 2021, and lioden is planned to have a recode happen. Maybe it's time to get a professional writer for the event story lines and maybe even some other places around lioden. I would love to see the wiki be updated with a professional writer as well.

I am not saying it's not done great, it is. But some times it is hard finding something with in text. And the event story lines are a little hard to read. I normally just go through them and choose the same path I did in the previous year.

Just an idea to the lioden team, maybe hire a writer and offer to pay them in lioden goods. Like apps, items or even an event item.

Again this is just an idea.



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la leyenda (#226412)

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Posted on
2021-01-15 20:40:48
Absolutely add a better storyline for these events. So many of them feel like generic fetch quests with a different skin put on them, and I'd love to see more events in the vein of July with branching endings where it feels like your choices actually matter. Some months really suffer in interest because they have no appeal, barely any good items, and no storyline (looking at March). I love the NPCs of this game a lot, I would love to see Lioden do more with them. Like add a large battle for the October war between the nephelines vs demons, or more karma options for March, or some more explore cameos. FULL SUPPORT.



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di (#126735)

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Posted on
2022-01-04 15:08:23
Support!

One of the item descriptions that always throw me off is for the Jacana Leg: "What a weird leg! Wading birds surely must walk on water."

Like... huh? What? I'm so confused? It irks me every time I read it, tbh. XD



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Xylax (#4)

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Posted on
2024-01-29 16:01:31
We have two writers now so I will mark it as added to the game, but whatever you want re-written gotta be suggested separately ;D



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