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Kyrotonia (#2299)


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2015-08-22 13:19:55
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All I want is for someone who has either had a custom decor accepted, or is good at anatomy to red line this please. I know it looks really finished smoothness wise, but I just don't want it to get rejected this time. Any help is appreciated. :)
I suck at paws, hence the crappy paws. Those have already been edited 22637685 times. x_x
I have had multiple decors rejected for anatomy alone.


If you take the signature off, it is considered stolen. I am only looking for help, not looking to sell/give it away.



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Keen (#45730)

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Posted on
2015-08-22 13:22:25
Legs need to be longer. Tall base thinner.



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Kyrotonia (#2299)


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2015-08-22 13:23:47
Ahh, makes sense. If you have time, could you show me more visually? I'm merely asking for a quick, sketchy/rough looking example.



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Keen (#45730)

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Posted on
2015-08-22 13:28:53
I could show you tomorrow if no one else has. I'm on mobile atm.



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Kyrotonia (#2299)


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Posted on
2015-08-22 13:29:26
Ah, okay. Thank you for the input though. :3



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shaska (#10801)


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Posted on
2015-08-22 13:30:53
I might redline this in the morning. :p
or y'know I could do it now when I'm tired and shouldn't be trusted with a computer really whatever floats your boat
ANYWAY
I redlined it for you, aligning the heads. I only used one reference so it's kinda crappy and shouldn't be trusted as your only source; get advice from other artists. Should serve decently as a reference for a realistic lion, though.
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Useful notes:
- Lion backs are not sloped
- The legs don't have many sharp corners or really prominent joints or juts; they're very smooth/kinda saggy-shaped I guess.
- Eyes don't sit on top of the forehead c;

If you ever need more help just let me know and I'll try my best ouo



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Edited on 22/08/15 by Shaska | TWP | SF | (#10801)

Kyrotonia (#2299)


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Posted on
2015-08-22 13:37:32
Alright, I'd appreciate it. :)



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shaska (#10801)


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Posted on
2015-08-24 06:23:30
Edited my above post- hope that helps eue



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FoolsgoldFenrir (#27778)

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Posted on
2015-08-24 06:27:14
Here is what needs to be fixed:

-The mane is usually not that fluffy.
-Tail base needs to be thinner.
-Lion needs to be slightly skinnier and longer. Loins aren't that fat and short.
-Legs need to be spread further apart, and longer.
-Lion also needs to be taller. Lions aren't short.
-Maybe make the teeth more sharp. Maybe a squiggly line across it to make it look more like teeth that carnivores have? Lions don't have flat teeth.
-Ear needs to be slightly larger.

And yeah.



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Edited on 24/08/15 by Simba the Fluffy Lion (EL) (#27778)

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Posted on
2015-08-24 06:38:45
If you'd like help from me as well I'd be happy to help.



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FoolsgoldFenrir (#27778)

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Posted on
2015-08-24 08:44:10
So, yeah. If you want, I can post a lion and lioness anatomy picture sheet if you like.



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