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 TheGeeko (#24694) Deathlord of the Jungle View Forum Posts  Posted on 2016-06-03 10:22:55 |
Well it kinda can't be red...because my sketch is red. xD Gunna have to be a diff colour But I'm sketching out a ref sheet for one of my OCs (A lioness) and...for some reason it seems REALLY off...I can't tell what but SOMETHING does... Would anyone mind helping me by going over and correcting mistakes? c:  (Click and drag to see full size) It'd be...really appreciated if anyone wouldn't mind :o It's supposed to be like...a serious stance, looking over stuff and the likes but...the legs, the body, everything seems wonky o.e  0 players like this post! Like? Edited on 03/06/16 @ 17:23:26 by Blaize-The Royal Guardian (#24694) |
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memieve (#89345)
Angelic View Forum Posts Posted on 2016-06-03 10:27:02 |
perhaps the length should be longer and the buffness should be lowered 0 players like this post! Like? |
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TheGeeko (#24694)
Deathlord of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2016-06-03 10:27:53 |
The topic coding squishes the image for some reason...click and drag the image to see the full size of the screenshot c: 0 players like this post! Like? |
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memieve (#89345)
Angelic View Forum Posts Posted on 2016-06-03 10:29:53 |
oh, ok, i'm rather new xD other than the buffness then, the hind leg looks kinda awkward. i would look at the lioden fanart for reference. 0 players like this post! Like? |
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LionLover*G21900+Alb in* (#36443) 
Toxic View Forum Posts Posted on 2016-06-03 10:33:24 |
The tail needs to be longer and there is no hair tuft on the tip of the tail for females :D 0 players like this post! Like? |
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LionLover*G21900+Alb in* (#36443)
Toxic View Forum Posts Posted on 2016-06-03 10:34:44 |
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TheGeeko (#24694)
Deathlord of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2016-06-03 10:35:11 |
I give all my OCs tail tufts~ They all have them, all lionesses do~ Oop seen other one, aha nah this is a lioness c: 0 players like this post! Like?Edited on 03/06/16 @ 17:42:32 by Blaize-The Royal Guardian (#24694) |
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ruvik (#51318)
Mean View Forum Posts Posted on 2016-06-03 10:46:47 |
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Snowball (#36028)
King of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2016-06-03 21:51:17 |
Based on what I know, the main issues seem to be that the feet are a bit too short and the back doesn't usually slope downwards like a german shepherd, but curves back up at the hind legs. Redline: LINK I hope this helps somehow c: EDIT: I'm a dummy and forgot about this, but you usually can't see a lioness' chest from the side view because it doesn't really extrude out like a canine's. Usually you can only see chest fur. 0 players like this post! Like?Edited on 04/06/16 @ 05:14:39 by Snowball (#36028) |
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vickers (#80696)
Impeccable View Forum Posts Posted on 2016-06-04 06:39:16 |
From what I can see in your sketch, you should make the knee a little more bent as well, since that leg looks very stiff. But the rest looks fine! The main issues here are only the sloped back and the stiff leg. I think that if you did some construction lines, it would help immensely. Like this:  The legs I drew look a bit canine, but I just did this to show how I sketch legs. It really helps a lot to think of it in "chunks" 0 players like this post! Like?Edited on 04/06/16 @ 13:40:00 by vickers (#80696) |
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