Posted by Some Art I did (Critiques Welcome!)

HeckingOlive (#104719)

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2017-01-26 09:21:12
So I drew a dog and a dog head!
Please no one steal these, I'm very proud of them. I also did extras for my dog head so I can use it as a tag as soon as I get it based :3

Here is the dog!
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Here are the heads!
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I'm also drawing dog heads with perked ears!
Please please please give me more tips and suggestions for the dog head, like accessories and such. Thanks!



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Mylo (#104190)

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2017-01-26 09:36:56
*Screams* I've never critiqued anyone before, but I wanna help people with their art,-

I really like these, but the snout is a little curved inwards on the bottom three, and unless you're going for a cartoonish style, if you look at dogs from the side, very few breeds have inward curved snouts. On the top one the ears are a bit pointy,- again, unless you're going for cartoonish, dogs don't really have very pointy ears, usually they're slightly curved on top, even cats don't have pointy ears, that's usually just fur!

https://thumbs.dreamstime.com/z/husky-dog-profile-portrait-28584751.jpg

With the husky above you can see the curved ears, it is also a good example of the snout as well.

But otherwise, the anatomy is pretty good, and you can do better floppy ears then most people I've seen, those are harder to draw in my opinion!



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Edited on 26/01/17 @ 16:37:31 by Archie (#104190)

HeckingOlive (#104719)

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2017-01-26 10:34:03
Thank you very much Archie! I am going for the cartoonish feel so I'm going to leave it like that because I think it's freaking cute as hell. I'll make the pointy ears more rounder as well.



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Mots - RP Loved🏒 (#5378)

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2017-01-26 11:38:44
Not too bad. Here is my Weim for an example on floppy ears. Clicky and Clicky

You can also look on DA at this tutorial for dogs. Johann is one of the best canine artists out there. But of course since you're going for cartoony, disregard my suggestions.



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HeckingOlive (#104719)

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2017-01-26 11:49:17
Mots thanks so much! I will use you're dog to help me with the floppy ears. I will also search that person on DA. Thanks so much!



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HeckingOlive (#104719)

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2017-01-26 13:58:05
Did some more fixed a few things. Still working on the floppy ears .-.

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