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TrashRamen (#144842)

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2019-11-03 18:39:15
ding ding ding top of morning LD---

I'd been thinking of making a "Dragon Guardian" Custom Decor for a while and decided to give it a shot. I'm not a very good artist at all, but I've always wanted to make a Custom Decor. Criticism is very, very wanted. Please feel free to point out what needs to change and what I'm doing right (if anything), as it will help me immensely.
Keep in mind this is basically just a concept sketch. It will be more detailed when done if I even finish. If I do, I will most likely make versions for every age. The dragon will become less aggressive as the lion ages.
I will add progress sketches as I make them.
dragdecornewbornwip

Sketches/Concepts:
dragdec2
drag3
drag4
drag5

I've already made a little description:
Looks like this dragon has grown attached to your lion and just won't leave their side! They protect it as if it's their offspring.

Thank you so much! :)
Sorry if this is a bad place, I've been seeing a lot of interest check and such posts, and thought this fits here. I'm not new to LD but new to Chatter as I rarely use it,,,



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Edited on 03/11/19 @ 20:09:27 by 🍜TrashRamen🍜 (#144842)

~dio~ (#188921)

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2019-11-03 19:09:54
I need like 10 of them like yesterday yes yes yes I loooooove it!!!



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Rappadapa (#159680)

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2019-11-03 19:17:34
Only critique I have is things about the anatomy such as:

- The arms are a little noodle-like to me
- I feel like the chest/body should be a bit thicker


Looks good to me otherwise! I like the idea



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Edited on 03/11/19 @ 19:17:44 by Rappadapa (#159680)

TrashRamen (#144842)

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2019-11-03 19:19:45
@dio
Really? Thank you so much!

@Rappadapa
Thank you for the critique! I'm glad you like it. Anatomy with bodies has always been a struggle for me. :)



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2019-11-03 19:24:11
Added sketches/concepts for cub young, cub, and teen male!



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Rappadapa (#159680)

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2019-11-03 19:25:29
Now that I also see the other versions I think that the adol version should maybe be a bit bigger? If I compare it to the other sizes of the dragons it seems too small



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2019-11-03 19:25:36
OH MY GOSH Yes. Just yes. I love the idea, the sketches are great, it's adorable, I love it. Yes. Please.

But I do agree with Rappadapa, the arms are a bit skinny. Thicken em up a bit and it's perfect :O



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TrashRamen (#144842)

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2019-11-03 19:27:24
Thank you all so much and hmm, that adol one does look pretty small. Lemme edit that,,,


he's got spaghet arms



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Edited on 03/11/19 @ 19:28:09 by 🍜TrashRamen🍜 (#144842)

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2019-11-03 20:11:31
I really need help with coloring and shading. I'm terrible at it as I usually use a very sharp and cartoony style. This was just a little test to see how it would look and oH heLL is it bAd
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