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Bookin_Shrek_lolz (#233948)

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Posted on
2023-08-31 12:00:13
I love to write, and I'd love to brush up on my skills! This will be my first set of commissions ever, so please be patient with me :)! If these prices seem too high, please let me know! I'll write basically everything/anything, unless it's something to do with a minor in a suggestive situation.

Prices:
1 Paragraph: 100 SB
2 Paragraph(s): 200 SB
3 Paragraph(s): 400 SB
4 Paragraph(s): 500 SB
5+ Paragraph(s): 550+ SB (Price depends on length if it's past 5 paragraphs :))

Comment if you want to order a commission, and in the comment I'd like as many details and info on what you want made! Adjustments can always be made to your commission if needed, and I'm a very fast writer, so it should be done ASAP, but be aware, I'm a student, so most of the weekdays I'll be offline, but I'm online almost every night so I'll get to your message(s) as soon as I humanly can!

Examples of Previous Writing Comms:

Commission to: Rhett (#442545)

Outlaw was a cub born under unfortunate circumstances. Her Mother was left to raise Outlaw on her own after her cub’s Father abandoned her soon after conception. But the Fatherless nature of her birth didn’t discourage Outlaw one bit. In fact, it only made her more determined. She didn’t know much about her Father, only that he was a ‘Savage Man Eater’ as her Mother put it. And she was just like him in that respect. Evil. Cunning. Cruel. However, if Loyalty was a lion, Outlaw would be it.

Nobody hurts her family, or her pride, for they will answer to her unbridled ferocity, which knows no bounds. Killing is a hobby to her, which tends to keep any and all potential predators at bay, making her an essential asset to her pride; Gale. The Marshes surrounding Gale echo whispers of the legend detailing the extreme, ungodly power she holds. While there are too many languages to count, Outlaw only speaks one that happens to be universally understood… Violence.



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Edited on 04/09/23 @ 03:42:06 by Bookin_Shrek_lolz (#233948)

Rhett (#442545)

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2023-09-03 05:26:25
Looking for two-three paragraphs.

Pride info

I'd like her personality taken into account when writing for her.

King and founder: Acho

She was born In August.

Pride location: Marshland

Pride name: Gale

Outlaw: Her mother Bek was smitten with a roaming male who showed up at the height of the drought in August. Bek didn't realize until after they'd had a night of fun that he was a savage evil man eater. Once he had, had his fun he left her. Bek soon gave birth tot heir daughter Outlaw. Despite Bek's best efforts Outlaw ended up every bit as evil and cruel as he dad.

Outlaw takes joy in toying with those weaker than herself. She is tough, violent, strong and cunning. However she loves her mother and her pride dearly and se respects King Acho. Even if she thinks kindness is a weakness. She would never hurt anyone in her pride and she is fiercely protective of her pride and will kill anyone who tries to hurt a member of her pride.

https://www.lioden.com/lion.php?id=794201416459
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This savage male is her father https://static.lioden.wiki/images/content/pages/mockups/event/august/2023-pariah-scoundrel.jpeg



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Bookin_Shrek_lolz (#233948)

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2023-09-03 05:28:45
Alright, so is there a specific sort of scene you'd like me to write her in? Like maybe someone tries to hurt her family or something along those lines?



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Rhett (#442545)

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2023-09-03 05:30:00
I'd like it done as kind of a biography. So a mix of that and facts. I'll send you the sb now



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Bookin_Shrek_lolz (#233948)

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2023-09-03 05:32:33
Alright, perfect, so just to make sure, just kind of a synopsis of her as a whole and facts about her? And would you like me to send the finished product through this comment thread or directly to your messages?



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Rhett (#442545)

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2023-09-03 05:34:36
Yes that's write. I treat all their bios as a story/biography of their lives. DM is fine. Also my pride is set in the 1920s. So no mentions of modern things.



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Bookin_Shrek_lolz (#233948)

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2023-09-03 05:35:26
Okay, perfect! It should be ready within an hour or two! :)



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2023-09-04 03:47:27
could I pay 700 sb for like 6-7 paragraphs? This gal is the one i'd like it for https://www.lioden.com/lion.php?id=794200996086 . Can you write in the past, so when she's an adolescent training to be an allseer (in my pride thats a lion who speaks with spirits). and she starts hearing/seeing flashes of past lives, since she is in contact with a deceased pride. Hopefully thats not to hard- willing to pay 1 gb if it is



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Bookin_Shrek_lolz (#233948)

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2023-09-04 03:50:22
Totally! I think I can do that! It might take 30-60 minutes or so, but I'll send you what I have once it's done/up for adjustments! Thank you so much for the commission! Any more details I should know? Like anything else specific you'd like included in the essay?



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TheCrazyGiraffeLady (#47268)

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2023-09-16 09:08:13
Hello ^^
I would love to commission a piece for my pink boy please, about a certain section of his life if possible.
After suffering fatal wounds, he fled to find a quiet place to die in peace. On the brink of loosing consciousness, a strange lion appears and offers a deal; the stranger will take Lew's pain in exchange for Lew taking the stranger's peace. Lew mutters a faint 'yes' before he passes out, to what he believes to be death. But a few hours later, Lew wakes up to find no trace of the injuries that had marred his fur; no scars line his skin. He is in shock but accepts the way of the world within realising the fate he has just agreed to.

Lew: https://www.lioden.com/lion.php?id=794202172233
Stranger I have a picture of a sharman style but nothing else.

Word count would be up to you as would hate to limit anything, but I can spend up to 1500SB on this ^^
Any questions, happy to answer them so ask away.

Thank you!



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Bookin_Shrek_lolz (#233948)

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2023-09-16 09:12:44
I can totally do that! Just one question though, "the stranger will take Lew's pain in exchange for Lew taking the stranger's peace" was peace an error? And if not, what does it mean for him to take the stranger's peace?



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2023-09-16 09:23:08
I'm BACK.
I need lore for my queen, is 1 gb enough payment for as many paragraphs as that can buy- i cant do math.
Right now all i've got is she is a former corrupted spirit that was accidentally reborn since my pride spirits arent very good at their jobs. She lost all of her memories from her past life+her time spent as an evil being. (why she's named Amnesia) She was born with the serpent's tongue, the wings, and the demonic looking horns due to the evil being she had once been, and she would often experience bad dreams of her past life before she was queened as the pride's leader. after 4 years the deities realised their mistake and tried to get rid of her once again, leading to them figuring out how powerful she actually is since she had spent time with a powerful corrupt entity in her life before.

Just realized thats a lot- can you go from there and write a bit about her past life and the flashbacks+when she was born? i dont really mind what you do, just need some lore for my silly gal



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Bookin_Shrek_lolz (#233948)

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2023-09-16 09:26:49
For sure! I can do that, I think it should take a day or two MAX, but I should have it done soon! And yes 1 GB will be more than enough! Thank you so much for coming back! I'll start writing ASAP! :)



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Bookin_Shrek_lolz (#233948)

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2023-09-16 09:56:27
One question, Fancy Fork, is it okay if she speaks english? Or would you rather her communicate in lion vocalizations?



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TheCrazyGiraffeLady (#47268)

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2023-09-16 09:57:04
Sorry for the delay!
Yes peace was an error, it should have said place - Lew would take the strangers place as the stranger took Lews pain
The idea being the stranger was immortal, then the stranger took lews pain and swapped the immortal to lew



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2023-09-16 09:57:25
english is preferred, yeah. most of my lore has the lions speaking



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