For clarity, I am referring to this message:



This territory has lion(s) that are aging up tomorrow and you may not have enough territory to cope with them all!

I underlined a minor fix I would make, which would be fixing the grammatical(?) disconnect between "This territory" (third person perspective) and "you" (second or first person perspective, depending on interpretation). It's a bit strange and disjointed to read "you may not have enough territory" if you're, y'know, not the player whose territory the Den message is on. I would personally prefer if "you" was omitted entirely, or swapped to "they" to keep things consistent.

The pRoPeR way would be omitting that pronoun, as currently the message is a run-on sentence or whatever. But I'm not a huge stickler for correct punctuation most of the time. The run-on issue would also be fixed by adding a comma before "and".

This territory has lion(s) that are aging up tomorrow, and they may not have enough territory to cope with them all!

This territory has lion(s) that are aging up tomorrow and may not have enough territory to cope with them all!

The second change is less of a minor ignorable annoyance and more of something I desperately crave because of the way I keep lions. I would really love to see the number of lions aging up right in the Den message so I don't have to do a whole lot of counting after I chase a few adolescents away to have space. I know the number shows up on the Daily Rollover Summary, but it can be rather inconsistent - sometimes it doesn't tell me the number of adolescents I have aging up at all, so it's a bit of a surprise for me to find the message on my Den page that I don't have space. Plus, it doesn't give updated information after I clear a bit of space, so I have to count the remaining ones and subtract that from the number of territory spaces I have.

A distinction between male and female lions would be especially amazing. Currently what I do each day is go through my chase cave and chase all newly aged adult lionesses into the NCL pool as well as chase off unwanted male adolescents who are 1y 11mo. Sometimes I'll get confused when the message doesn't go away because there happens to be a male adolescent aging up in another cave that I forgot about. It'd make things a lot easier if the Den message was constructed somewhat like this:

This territory has [x] lionesses and [x] male lion(s) that are aging up tomorrow and may not have enough territory to cope with them all!

(The bold part would not show up if there aren't any male lions aging the next rollover, to avoid unnecessary clutter.)

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My other suggestions:
Masterpost here