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prologue
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the pale blue furred large she-leader carried my small body as I meowed hungry and weak. She put me down on a small orange furred Queen already nursing one kit "hm what is it- leaf,star! Where did you get that kit from." They asked on a worried voice. Leaf,star put me down as I let out a weak meow my black fur glistened in the moon light. "That doesn’t matter right now." She continued before the Queen could answer "listen bright,heart I really need you to nurse this kit she is on the verge of death. Please" bright,heart looked at the leaders pleading yellow eyes "fine.." she finally let out before letting me nurse on her milk, the leader bowed her head in appreciation before walking out of the den.
“Hm… I shall name you, moon,kit.” She said as the star in the sky shined brighter

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as a few moons went by I was known as the adopted kit and had no friends besides my 'brother' dark kit, he had grey fur like my father stone,foot. He also had blue eyes like my mother. As I woke up next to my mother who, was fast asleep. I groomed myself I got up and trotted over to my brother who was playing with some other kits "dark,kit wanna play with me!" I asked him as he turned around towards me his ears timid. The other kits mud,kit a Tom light brown tabby, and bee,kit a she that looked like a bee and whispered something in dark,kits ear my brother took a deep breath before finally saying something "no moon,kit I don't wanna play with you." They continued as the other kits started snickering "you aren't even my real sister the only reason I am nice to you is because mom said I have to." I looked shocked at him before I could get a word out he continued "so leave me alone you- you adopted kit" he growled as I ran over back to mother ignoring the other kits laughing and giggling.

"Sweetheart what's wrong?" My mom asked as I ran under her tail. She mumbled some inaudible words. My mom didn't ask anymore questions as she picked me up and licked me a bit. as slowly calm down with her comfort, I was still a bit upset but I calmed down a bit. I drifted to sleep my tail flicked. When I woke up almost every at in the nursery was asleep. I glanced next to me and saw dark, kit sleeping. I trotted out the den by the small river outside of the
Nursery. I turned my head and saw Thorn, fur a dark brown Tom he kinda reminded of Tiger,claw a bad person that the elders used to tell us about. Thorn, fur was giving out the night patrols. I got a quick sip of water as leaf,star sat next to me.

I "hm moon,kit what are you doing out of the den?" They asked me in a soft tone "oh uh I was just a bit thirsty!" I said as shine star nuzzled me "you should head to sleep moon,kit." I paused for a moment before answering her “okay!” I trotted back to my den
The next day I saw that dark,kit was getting scolded by my father, i trotted over tot them to hear what they were saying better “listen moon,kit might be adopted but that gives you no right to be rude to her. She is your sister and you will treat her like that” stone,foot growled at dark,kit as he cowered in fear “I-I’m sorry d-dad!" He said his voice shaking, before I could hear anything else a Warrior came up to me "moon,kit Shouldn't you be inside the Nursery And not easedropping." Blood,claw he’s a Black tom with scars all over him some new some old. He pickedme up and bringing me back to the nursery.

"No fair!" I plopped down by my mother's side as he put me down. Dark, kit trotted over to me. “Moon,kit I,m sorry…” he whimpered. “It’s okay I forgiv-“ before I could finish he speeds away. I smirked and layed on my back "this is going to be a awesome life" I Thought as dark,kit came back with timed ears an plopped down next to mom muttering some words that I couldn't make out.


To be continued….



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Edited on 30/12/23 @ 22:31:47 by Paw (GIRL) (#300585)

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Rules!

1, this is not a thread for posting ads! This is for talking about the book, the characters, etc.

2, this book is inspired by “warrior cats” made by “Erin Hunter”.

3, you may post fan art, theories, ideas, etc.

4, please do not disrespect me the book or anyone else.

And with that enjoy the book!



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Q and A”s:





Working on: cheaper 2 and 3
How many paragraphs is it: for chapter 2, 5+ For chapter 3, 5-10



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Edited on 15/12/23 @ 13:32:05 by Paw (GIRL) (#300585)

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Changed Browns kits name to Mud,kit**



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