Posted by My lore

sluggedbone (1/100)
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Posted on
2024-03-20 07:37:29
This is my lore do not copy/steal without perms!

OLD LORE ;

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New lore ;


Islet words


What you can do (in response to my lore)


What you cannot do



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Edited on 21/03/24 @ 06:36:10 by sluggedbone (#442217)

Froggy🐸🐸side/G
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Posted on
2024-03-21 05:32:48
Need a comma here after "unknown forest "

This sentence is difficult, and may need reworked " Protected by a cover of dense and tall trees those who have past come here to rest where their souls may live on with the watching eye looking over their pride. "

Need a comma here " a leader a queen"

I think alongside is one word "Slugged along side with"

Maybe there is misused word here? "although till enduring the"

Doesn't bother me tho, just trying to be constructive. I love the lore, it's interesting and easy to read



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