Posted by Sharing a Commission[critique wanted]

Quinn (#1866)

Deathlord of the Jungle
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Posted on
2015-11-29 09:42:03

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Just wanted to share this with you guys. Just finished this commission for someone, and I'm super proud of it ^^

However, I'm always willing to take constructive criticism, especially on anatomy. Please note: the commissioner choose the outline and background color, haha.

Any comments are greatly appreciated!




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Sootsprite (#28010)

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Posted on
2015-11-29 11:41:04


I like it a lot . I personally can't see anything that really needs fixing . Your style is adorable .
The only thing I might suggest is livening up the eyes a smidge .

Do you do other animals as well or mainly felines ? c:




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Quinn (#1866)

Deathlord of the Jungle
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Posted on
2015-11-29 12:10:30

Thank you!
I was debating on adding highlights to the eyes or not. I don't remember there being a specific reason i didn't, though.

I mainly draw felines and canines. My dA is here. If you're interested in a Commission or anything, just message me ^^




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|| Sootsprite || (#29690)

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Posted on
2015-11-29 12:13:51


No problem . c:
Even though eye highlights are kind of small and sometimes even looked passed, I feel like they kind of bring the characters to life .

I'll definitely be sure to commission you at some point . ^^




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FelixVulpes #Gaggle (#6196)

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Posted on
2015-11-29 13:45:11
that's adorable n_n

if I had to comment (and this is really nit picking since you asked for crit XD ) then maybe the eyes are a bit too close together, and the nose too small for anatomy, it works with the style well though XD

highlights could be good also :3 give it a more rounded feel



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Quinn (#1866)

Deathlord of the Jungle
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Posted on
2015-11-29 15:20:47
I agree, Moro. ^^ I really don't know why I didn't put them there in the first place. Regardless, the commissioner has accepted it and wants nothing changed. ^^; So I'll just have to remember it for the next one is all. =)

Thank you Felix! I'm always trying to improve my anatomy, so I appreciate the comment. ^^ I love how cute the nose is though xD But I will definitely look into fixing it in the future ^^



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Nanave (#74849)

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Posted on
2015-11-29 15:30:38
I love cat, and can't find anything wrong with it. I'd pick a different backround color and shade than the dark orange. The cat needs a different color to make it stand out.



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