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2022-03-17 01:00:13
Hey, welcome to my thread. I'll be doing writing commissions here! I'm not sure on pricing, and I love writing so I suppose this'll be pay what you want! Throughout the writing process I'll be talking to you and you're welcome to let me know of any adjustments you'd like, or extra bits of information.

Examples:
Short:
You trudge through the wet undergrowth as rain splats down and slides of the drenched leaves. You look up, hoping to see the sky clearing, but instead, a fat raindrop lands right on your nose. You shake your head, spraying the nearby bushes in water. You'd hoped you'd be there by now. The lion had said he's be waiting. Oh well. You continued through the rainforest, keeping an eye out for any signs of life or movement that could indicate the lion's arrival.

Medium: (This is my den Bio)
You tentatively step a paw onto the foreign land, ears stiffened for signs of enemy lions. You taste the air and pick up the faintest scent of lions. Suddenly an elegant Frostbitten male slinks out of the shrubbery beside you. He's wearing a silver bodywear covered in coins that jingle as he slides from the bushes. He has on a crown of white flowers, and petals bounce off his sleek fur as he walks. His voice is soft and charming, and seems to entrance you as he speaks, almost like a lullaby. 'I know a place where all is calm, where the lions sleep and come to no harm. I know a place where you belong, where the lions whisper and sing their songs. I can take you there if only you let me, just close your eyes and go to sleep.' You feel your eyelids getting heavy and you collapse on the forest floor. Your final vision is of a charming Silver lion staring straight into your eyes, with a faint smile on his perfect face.

long:
The heat was scorching on your back, wearing into your thick fur and weaselling it's way into your body, making you weaker and weaker by the second. Your mouth is parched and it feels like all the moisture in your body has been evaporated. You're exhausted, the heat is like a leech, sucking away your energy until you've got no fight left in you, leaving nothing behind. You look up to the azure sky, and see the sun almost smiling down at you. It's cruel. You hear a shriek and gaze upwards once more to see a pair of vultures lazily circling the air above you. They're waiting. Waiting for you to die. You felt like tossing your head up and roaring at the world, your rage for having let you end like this. Your paws begin to grow heavy as you stumble onward, tripping over rocks and piles of sand as you go. Slowly, your vision fades and swirls, like shrikes on the wind. You feel yourself stumble and fall, collapsing on the scorching sand.

You blink open your weary eyelids. Suddenly you feel refreshed. The air is cool and fresh, and smells faintly of herbs. You heave yourself up onto your paws, rolling over so you're facing the other way. You catch a glimpse of a slender white lioness sorting herbs in the corner of the cave. Where am I? you think, what If I'm a hostage!? You quickly shut your eyes, pretending to be asleep again. You couldn't help but sneak a peek at the lioness, watching her gracefully tidy her cave. Where am I?

Obviously I can do longer ones, or shorter ones, but these are just examples. Pay what you think is fair! Here's the form:

Type of Bio: (Lion, cave, den page)
Characters involved:
Length:
Storyline:
Any extra details:
Payment:
Anything else I should know:

Thank you! xx



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Posted on
2022-03-21 16:17:38
Hello! Is this still open, If you don't mind me asking?

๐“๐ฒ๐ฉ๐ž ๐จ๐Ÿ ๐๐ข๐จ๐ ๐ซ๐š๐ฉ๐ก๐ฒ: Lion - Abeda.
๐‚๐ก๐š๐ซ๐š๐œ๐ญ๐ž๐ซ๐ฌ ๐ˆ๐ง๐ฏ๐จ๐ฅ๐ฏ๐ž:Traveler, Abeda, Cubs and 1 Random Pride Member.
๐‹๐ž๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก: Long.
๐’๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐ž:
It had been about a couple of days since the traveler had been staying at the pride, and had been napping when he / she gets disturbed by the cubs whom been playing.
Immediately get told off by abeda, the broodmother of the pride as she apologies on behalf of the cubs before one of the other pride members notify them that it meal time.
๐€๐ง๐ฒ ๐„๐ฑ๐ญ๐ซ๐š ๐ƒ๐ž๐ญ๐š๐ข๐ฅ๐ฌ: It in the traveler's point of view / pov.
๐๐š๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ž๐ง๐ญ: SB - 1 GB.
๐€๐ง๐ฒ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐  ๐„๐ฅ๐ฌ๐ž ๐ˆ ๐’๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐Š๐ง๐จ๐ฐ: It in the den pride intro but due to the king's mercy, traveler allowed to remain inside the pride and it territory up until they fully recover from their injuries.



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๐Ÿ”บTriangle๐Ÿ”ป(#1
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2022-03-21 23:32:43
Yes it's still open!

Here it is! Just send payment over once you read it through and let me know if anything needs tweaking!

You enjoyed the sun on your back as you napped, and it almost felt like your injury wasn't there. For once in a while, you felt content, just listening to the pride going about their business. Slowly, you felt your eyelids drooping. You were so relaxed, the gentle sun felt so good, if you could just stay awake...

Suddenly, You were woken by a loud squeal in your left ear. You quickly jumped up, looking around warily as if you were in danger. Then you caught sight of a couple of cubs, frisking around you. Just cubs you thought, just cubs. You sat back down shakily and watched them play for a bit, enjoying their carefree antics. It was nice, not having to worry. A voice rang from the side of the cave, where a rosy Brown lioness strode towards you and the cubs. She had a terrifying snarl etched on her face, she seemed to be seething with anger. You lowered your head, wondering if you were in trouble. Instead, she turned to the cubs. By now they had all tried to hide behind rocks or little crevvices in the cave wall. But it was no good. 'HOW DARE YOU WAKE UP OUR GUEST?!' she thundered, her voice loud as the gunshots that the humans brought. THAT IS SO DISRESPECTFUL! COME WITH ME NOW!She finished, glaring at the now terrified cubs through her glaze colored eyes. She then turned to you. You flinched, afraid she'd turn her fury on you. But she looked sympathetically at you. 'I'm sorry you were woken. Those pesky cubs are so naughty. I don't pay attention for one second and they're gone. I hope you understand.' You nodded. 'Of course I do,' you reply,'Of course I understand.' Your conversation was interrupted by a lioness, who popped her head around the cave entrance. 'It's meal time!' they said, with shrieks of delight from the cubs. They scampered off, leaving the broodmother behind. GET BACK HERE! She screamed, 'I'm gonna murder them-' she muttered as she stalked away. You followed, looking forward to talking with the pride.



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Edited on 22/03/22 @ 14:16:21 by โˆ† Triangle โˆ† (#246866)

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Posted on
2022-03-22 12:06:01
Just sent the payment, sorry for the delay!



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2022-03-22 12:39:24
Sorry, I made half the text bold. I fixed it now!



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2022-03-22 13:31:16
It fine! I'll be commissioning more in the near future!



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2022-03-22 14:15:24
yay!



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2022-03-29 13:44:56
Hello Triangle!
If you don't mind, commissioning another work?

๐“๐ฒ๐ฉ๐ž ๐จ๐Ÿ ๐๐ข๐จ: Lion.
๐‚๐ก๐š๐ซ๐š๐œ๐ญ๐ž๐ซ๐ฌ ๐ˆ๐ง๐ฏ๐จ๐ฅ๐ฏ๐ž: Traveler, Ada, Ceresei.
๐‹๐ž๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก: Long.
๐’๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐ž: As ada shows traveler around, they briefly encounter ceresei, chofi and their entourage of four lionesses whom serve both of them.
Ada greets them, with the traveler following suit as ceresei eyes them especially the traveler before greeting back curtly.
All before ada excuses them on leaving as she still needs to show traveler around, when there far away ada warns traveler to be careful around ceresei.
๐€๐ง๐ฒ ๐„๐ฑ๐ญ๐ซ๐š ๐ƒ๐ž๐ญ๐š๐ข๐ฅ๐ฌ:
It on ceresei bio at the end.
๐๐š๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ž๐ง๐ญ: 1 GB.
๐€๐ง๐ฒ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐  ๐ž๐ฅ๐ฌ๐ž ๐ง๐ž๐ž๐๐ž๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ค๐ง๐จ๐ฐ:
Ceresei is the queen of the pride with chofi being her daughter.



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2022-03-29 13:47:14
well hello again! I'd be so happy to commission another piece! Writing now xx



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2022-03-29 13:47:43
Thank you!



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2022-03-29 14:07:04
You felt very refreshed after the meal, and were delighted when a young lioness who introduced herself as Ada asked you if you felt like a tour. You happily accepted, looking forward to make new friends in the pride. You didn't know how long you'd be there, so allies within the pride would be a useful asset. You heaved yourself up, giving yourself a quick shake of your fur to be on the best presentation. 'Let's get started, then!' Ada said, a polite smile on her friendly face. She turned around and trotted off, flicking her tail for you to follow. You ran for a small distance in order to catch p to her. Suddenly Ada stopped. You peered around her back to see why. She was speaking with a golden lioness with snake-like eyes. You could hear snippets of their conversation- 'I-I'm just showing the Traveller around!' You circled back around Ada, shifting to get a good look at the lioness. She wore beautiful golden jewellery that shone in the sun, making the elegant lioness look ablaze with fire. The fiery impression only continued as she looked both of you up and down with a scorching glare. She had a carefully arranged flower wreath on her head, which shook slightly when she moved, showering small petals on her fur. 'Greetings. I'm Ceresei. There's no need to reply. I know who you are.' You noticed her eyes lingering on you for a second to long before she looked away and back at Ada, who quickly added. 'Well then, we should probably be on our way to continue with the tour!' Grateful for an excuse to leave, you followed suit. Once you were out of earshot, Ada spoke. 'Stay away from her. It's like treading on broken glass, you might prick a paw. Be careful, Traveller.'

Ceresei Bio!

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2022-03-30 07:01:47
Thank you!



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2022-04-04 12:49:20
No problemo :D



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