Posted by Comic idea?

Thoonste (#347834)

Usual
View Forum Posts


Posted on
2022-10-12 16:36:36
Okay, so, I want to get more known in a sense, so I can get more people heading towards my commissions, as I need the money. And out of the blue, I thought of a digital comic series I could do, and I wanna see if anyone is interested! (if you wish to message me about this, either go to my insta at dasexpressarts OR my email, which is Dashewz022@gmail.com)

Okay! After a couple days, I have the idea more fledged out, and there’s a list of characters. There’s also a list of the first 15 people to support this idea. Those 15 people will get early access to every chapter after chapter 1 is created. Everyone else who wishes to get early access through whatever future source I use to host it, will be a one-time payment of either 500 SB or 10$ USD. This way, it adds an incentive to help me have motivation to continue this comic series once it’s properly started.
And the story is revised as of 10/15/22!
*Note, this is a Sapphic (WLW) & LGBTQ+ friendly comic. If you do not agree with this, block me and ignore this page.

Out of all the demons in hell, there's a category for each deadly sin, and their own subcategories. Case in point, like our main character, a demon of greed. More specifically, a greed of knowledge demon. Our main character is a lower-level knowledge demon, and as their lowest ranking, they work for the ferryman of hell’s river, the river Styx. She keeps their logs of spirits; when they die, how they die, who they are, and where they go. The gate these spirits go to depend upon how they die, which is signaled by the color of the glow around their ghostly form. For example, blue glowing spirits signal death by drowning and green is for poison. Black is for murder, so on, so on. But one fateful day, a new woman’s spirit appears in front of MC on the boat. Quiet and soft spoken in tone, with an oddly calm demeanor despite her frightened eyes, the spirit had a glow unlike the others; Her’s was… gold? MC knows gold has never been in the books, not now or even from the creation of hell in general. And due to her nature, MC’s curiosity grows. She wants to get as much time with the spirit as she can, as not just for her own interest, but the interest of the river’s magic. It’s known to go in a loop. It goes to every gate in hell, drops off the correct spirits to each gate, and then ends up back to where they started. But if this spirit doesn’t match, MC fears that there might be an end to the Styx, and to hell itself as well. She tries to get the spirit woman off the boat, to try and stall time and figure out what the hell (pun intended) was up with this one spirit.

Characters (none named yet or created. Trying to get concept art first):
Main- MC (greed of knowledge demon; lower rank)
Spirit woman (golden glowing spirit. Out of place, seemingly)
Side- Ferryman (blind, androgenous being. Senses the river with their hearing
and the vibrations on the stick used to push the boat)
Other spirits (random spirits seen throughout story)
Other demons (same as spirits)
Unknown (??? *spoiler for end of story, won’t be fully listed until i actually finish the series)

First 15 supporters!
-SlipperySock (#346746)
-Onestar (#251266)
-RedRum (Jackolope) {DHS} (#116117)
-Mika (#371866)
-DilfLover (#261517)
-lumnar [G6 RoseG 2x Ros] (#157209)
-Neo (They/It) (#370438)
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
































Hrt Icon 0 players like this post! Like?

Edited on 29/10/22 @ 20:40:35 by Dashewz (#347834)

DrySock| G3 Clouded
8x BO (#346746)

Toxic
View Forum Posts


Posted on
2022-10-12 18:33:25
I think the idea is worth it. The only thing I could say about improvement is perhaps finding a stronger reason for MC to try get her off the boat? Not sure though. I suggest posting frames of it on YouTube, and Devianart, as both websites are great for getting your name out.



Hrt Icon 0 players like this post! Like?

Thoonste (#347834)

Usual
View Forum Posts


Posted on
2022-10-12 18:38:24
@SlipperySock
Well thank you! As said, I literally just thought of this idea as a kind of Eureka moment after homework lol, so, it’s not fully fledged. Thanks for the advice though! I’ll be improving it soon after I get some designs done and such to add to this post



Hrt Icon 0 players like this post! Like?

DrySock| G3 Clouded
8x BO (#346746)

Toxic
View Forum Posts


Posted on
2022-10-13 17:03:03
Alright, I’ll stay up to date! :)



Hrt Icon 0 players like this post! Like?

☆Eclipse☆ (#251266)

Maneater
View Forum Posts


Posted on
2022-10-14 16:13:28
I think its interesting! I would love to draw characters for it and show you!



Hrt Icon 0 players like this post! Like?

Thoonste (#347834)

Usual
View Forum Posts


Posted on
2022-10-14 16:17:44
@Onestar

Sure thing! I’m struggling a bit for concept art so far, even while being an artist myself. Maybe you could help me with a couple of the side characters, as I wanna try getting the main ones myself. If you want, I can send you my instagram and set up a deal between us for this?



Hrt Icon 0 players like this post! Like?

☆Eclipse☆ (#251266)

Maneater
View Forum Posts


Posted on
2022-10-14 17:07:00
It might not be high quality but I'm good at making designs



Hrt Icon 0 players like this post! Like?

Thoonste (#347834)

Usual
View Forum Posts


Posted on
2022-10-14 17:12:19
@onestar

Thankfully not looking for high quality anyways lol, as I’m a more anime/cartoon artist so don’t worry



Hrt Icon 0 players like this post! Like?

☆Eclipse☆ (#251266)

Maneater
View Forum Posts


Posted on
2022-10-14 17:13:13
I'll probably start drawing now or tomorrow



Hrt Icon 0 players like this post! Like?

Jackalope {DHS} (#116117)


View Forum Posts


Posted on
2022-10-14 22:12:05
I'd read it, personally



Hrt Icon 0 players like this post! Like?


Edited on 14/10/22 @ 22:12:17 by RedRum (Jackalope) {DHS} (#116117)

Thoonste (#347834)

Usual
View Forum Posts


Posted on
2022-10-14 22:14:11
@RedRum (Jackalope)

glad to hear! should i put you down on the supporters list then? :D



Hrt Icon 0 players like this post! Like?

Mika (#371866)

Dreamboat of Ladies
View Forum Posts


Posted on
2022-10-15 10:48:12
i would love to support this!! :DDD it sounds like a very cool and fun idea! however one tid bit of advice is to not push yourself, if it doesn't work out it just doesn't! don't dig yourself a hole if the start is slow. as long as you enjoy it continue to do it! :D



Hrt Icon 0 players like this post! Like?

Thoonste (#347834)

Usual
View Forum Posts


Posted on
2022-10-15 10:49:43
@Mika

It's great that you enjoy it! and don't worry, my (possible) ADHD won't allow me to push myself, as it's either I do it or I say screw it and let go lol



Hrt Icon 0 players like this post! Like?







Memory Used: 624.80 KB - Queries: 0 - Query Time: 0.00000 - Total Time: 0.00376s