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2024-04-03 09:01:05
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Currently offering to do:

Pride Lore.
Lion Lore.
Cave Bios.
King/Queen/Ruler lore.

This is all FREE. You do not need to pay me to do this, but any gifts are appreciated. Once again, this is FREE!

Rules.
1. Use credits if you use the lore.
2. Please don't rush me, I have a life outside of Lioden and commissions take a while to do.
3. No rudeness, we're all people.
4. Be reasonable.
5. I ONLY do Lioden lore.
6. No NSFW, I'm a minor.
7. I have the right to refuse to make lore for you.

Below are some forms to fill out depending on what you would like me to do. If there is not a form for what you'd like please tell me and I'll make one and add it to the list. :D Pleas put N/A in any of the boxes that do not apply to what you'd like. I will begin to give you your lore in your INBOX instead of in the comments.

Pride lore

Pride Location:
Theme:
Lion(s) included:
Deities which the pride worship:
Ruler of Pride:
Special places in pride:
Anything else you think I'd find useful:

Lion Lore.

Lion's Link:
Theme:
Trauma (if any):
Small backstory:
With or without pride:
Role within pride:
Any deities they worship:
Anything you think I'd find useful:

Cave Bios.

Cave location:
Type of lions in cave (female, male ect):
Inside of cavern:
Outside of cavern:
Any special things inside said cave:
Anything else you'd think I'd find useful:

King/Queen/Ruler Lore.

Lion's Link:
Theme:
Trauma (if any):
Small backstory:
Any deities they worship:
Anything you think I'd find useful:


P.S If you find any spelling mistakes please tell me! Along with if there is no 'e' in a word or two extra e's, my 'e' key is a bit sticky.



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Edited on 05/04/24 @ 02:17:54 by Vance_ (#262547)

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WAS???(G1FringeNRLC) (#387866)

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2024-04-03 10:26:49
Pspspsp

Pride Location: wandering so uh yk
Theme: idk go funky
Lion(s) included: just my king, lionesses n stuff can just be considered background actors
Deities which the pride worship: U can find em in my kings description
Ruler of Pride: digga
Special places in pride: idk
Anything else you think I'd find useful: Ur cool :3



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Pancake (#399069)


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2024-04-03 10:42:31
Lion's Link: https://www.lioden.com/lion.php?id=794213171619 (my next king)

Theme: haunting yet soft

Trauma (if any): N/A

Small backstory: β±ΏπŒ™πŒŒ is basically the young grim reaper of lions and helps them find the after life and if they go to heaven or h3ll (he isn't meant to be scary he just trying to help them find their ways to the after life)

Any deities they worship: Anubis

Anything you think I'd find useful: June is his favorite event since the pride will be able to meet Anubis, he is very sweet even without knowing him u can just tell, there are these wisps that follow him around when he is on earth looking for lost lions



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Posted on
2024-04-03 10:45:27
Heya! could i ask for some cave bios?

Cave location: Located within a snowy mountain, very few plants blooming.

Type of lions in cave (female, male ect): The lions inside usually resembled fire or a flame.

Inside of cavern: The cave would slowly fade from an icey grassland to a flaming town.. (also kinda like hell)

Outside of cavern: Vines smothering the caves entrance, a grassy surface outside.

Any special things inside said cave: There are specific protectors, they all tend to have their own little quirk. {powers}

Anything else you'd think I'd find useful:

I can send the lead protectors link if needed, i'd also like it from a 3rd person perspective if you're to add communication. if you're needing anything else then don't be shy to ask!



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Vance_ (#262547)

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2024-04-03 10:52:59
@🐊 WAS??? (G2
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I also did the deities you worship in ur king's desc muejejejejejejejejejejeje.
I'm going to be using some themes we discussed from AGES ago when I did ur deity stuffs.

The Itinerants were a small pride, containing under three dozen lions and they constantly moved. The pride never stayed in one spot for more than a quarter moon and sometimes they only stayed in a spot for one sunhigh. The Itinerants were much like Traveling Witches. Some lionesses managed a makeshift cart which was lavender in colour containing crystals and herbs for them to sell to the surrounding prides. Every so often the pride would partake in a rite - which was basically a huge ceremony that respects all the deities which The Itinerants worship, some of these being Sobek, Ammit, Mamlambo, Inkosazana, Nomkhubulwane.

Digga was a fierce fighter, even though he was the literal size of an adolescent. The stories that he tells are always noted down in an ancient language by some of the pride's enchantresses. Along with Digga's stories the myths and legends of the deities which they worship are also copied down in a large book of papyrus scrolls. Only the pride king/queen/ruler can handle 'α›αšΊα›– α›ˆαš¨αš±αš¨α›’α›šα›–α›‹ α›Ÿαš  α›αšΊα›– α›α›α›αšΎα›–αš±αš¨αšΎα›α›‹.' as it is eons old, and the pages are so fragile they could disintegrate with one reckless touch. Along with the legends of Digga and the deities there are also spells within α›αšΊα›– α›ˆαš¨αš±αš¨α›’α›šα›–α›‹ α›Ÿαš  α›αšΊα›– α›α›α›αšΎα›–αš±αš¨αšΎα›α›‹.



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2024-04-03 13:09:56
@Solaris (#399069)

In a blue room sat the small cub, their pelt covered with patches of white fur that broke through their otherwise sterling silver fur. Coming from out of the cub's mouth were two ivory tusks that resembled those of an elephant and propped on their small frame was a single chain hat wrapped around their body like a silver serpent. Behind the cub in the blue room was a set of ancient scales that dipped in an unnerving manner, beckoning to any soul to come closer. The scales sat upon a blue marble box which had two idols of the jackal deity, Anubis, with their heads held high and ears erect. Behind the scales was a blue, translucent sheen that warped in random ways. There was a scene behind the portal like wall, it was like a copy of the room, but without the cub that sat in silence.
`` β±ΏπŒ™πŒŒ. `` Came a voice. `` β±ΏπŒ™πŒŒ. `` The voice was unnatural and seemed to come from all corners of the brilliant room the cub and the scales were in. β±ΏπŒ™πŒŒ was presumably the cub, as he began to rapidly whip his head around to find the booming voice that seemed to be of a higher power.

From behind β±ΏπŒ™πŒŒ came a mechanic whirring noise, then a sound that could only be described as a suction-like noise. Then a different voice came.
`` β±ΏπŒ™πŒŒ. I am Solaris. `` The cub turned around and was met by a lion much like him, but instead of a lion's head the feline had the head of a Jackal. It was purple in colour with calculating eyes, that inspected β±ΏπŒ™πŒŒ with a chuff. Fur from the purple jackal head spread from Solaris' neck down their back, chest and tail. The violet fur was matted in some places but was still shiny, regal almost. On their paws were bracelets with stones that were like nebulas. β±ΏπŒ™πŒŒ was amazed, the lion was much like Anubis but unique in every other aspect, he opened his mouth to speak to Solaris, but no words escaped his larynx.

`` Do you not remember? You are my heir, β±ΏπŒ™πŒŒ. `` Solaris said. `` You are to be Anubis' priest. You shall show souls the way to the afterlife much like your deity. β±ΏπŒ™πŒŒ, one day you will become the king of our pride - but for the time being you are to stay here until any souls on the mortal plain di. The scales you see before you are used to weigh the heart of the soul against one of Isis' feathers. If the heart is heavier than the feather the soul will go to The Duat. If not, and the heart of the soul is lighter than Isis' feather, then they are to go to The Fields of Aaru to live out the rest of their eternal life. `` The Jackal-headed lion paused and then drew in a large breath. `` These shall accompany you on your journeys on the mortal plain, if you find need to go there. `` Solaris blew some air onto β±ΏπŒ™πŒŒ, but it was not normal. It was blue in colouration and seemed to whisk around like smoke. From the large plume emerged three small plumes of the same blue hue. The large plume of smoke began to get smaller and smaller until it finally dissappeared, leaving the three new little whisps.



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PALE_BIRD (#248597)

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2024-04-03 13:22:32
:Its built on the type you gave me earlier, the king and queen.

Cave lore

Cave location: Large cave under ground, its like a tunnel that leads into a deep part of the forest (Clearing but sky is blocked by trees and thorns)
Type of lions in cave (female, male ect): Just cubs from the Royals (both and just one)
Inside of cavern: A monument
Outside of cavern: Guards
Any special things inside said cave:
Anything else you'd think I'd find useful: The Royals cubs have the same theme as earlier. Struggling to find peace with their parents origins diff prides lol. They stay away from outsiders and the rest of the pride!



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Edited on 03/04/24 @ 13:48:02 by PALE_BIRD (#248597)

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2024-04-03 13:32:11
@β™«ΒΈΒΈπ“œπ“Ύπ“Όπ“±π”‚ΒΈβ™« #465816

Just so you know, I've based this off of your cavern The Scorched Hiding, is that the correct one?

On the side of a frigid mountain a single cavern stood out from the otherwise pure, snowy ground. It was like a single grey eye that inspected the barren, bitter wasteland that stretched out for miles and miles on end. But from the cavern a glow of reddish orange came from the crevices deep within. If any soul dared to venture any closer and push past the thick vines that obscured the entrance, the ground would begin to burn their soft paws, the ground was as dry as the savannah's grass. All moisture from the outside was obliterated in an instant by the scorching.. something that was inside the cave.
A few tail lengths inside the cavern it opened into a wide, deep oval. It resembled hell in some aspects. Fire lapped at the walls from deep into the void, creating a black covering on all of the walls. Along the edge of the 'hole' in the center of the cavern walked lions and lionesses - if you could call them that. Their pelts glowed even brighter than the tongues of fire from the hole and they walked with a certain elegance. Chunks of their pelts floated away into the thick atmosphere, but it did not seem to cause them any distress. They did not have paws, but still glided along the sooty ground like it was any other day.

That was not it, inside the groove were engraved huts and within thee huts were even weirder 'lions'. They were even more unnatural than the glowing lions that walked along the edge of the hole - this time their entire body was created out of a single flame with no other detail. Yellow voids created the eyes of the cryptid felines that held themselves with the elegance of a noble. But, there wasn't an abundance of these cryptids like the other type of lions. If anything there were barely any, and they stuck together in groups, like they were better than the others and they were superior because they had pelts literally made up of flames.



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Posted on
2024-04-03 13:56:26
I Love that Lore!! thank you!



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Vance_ (#262547)

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2024-04-03 13:58:33
@PALE_BIRD (#248597)

A single statue of Anubis stood in the center of the moist, underground cavern. Green moss slowly grew on the top of the monument, staining the once pure black idol. Outside of the cavern sat two guards, watching the surrounding forest for any signs of danger. The monument within was sacred, to be protected at all costs. Along the walls was a repetitive scripture, that covered all four irregular walls in the cavern.
' α›αšΎ ᚨ αš α›Ÿαš±α›–α›‹α› α›žα›–α›–α›ˆ αš¨αšΎα›ž α›žαš¨αš±αš΄,
α›‹αš¨α› α›αšΉα›Ÿ α›šα›α›ŸαšΎα›‹, α›‹α›αš±α›ŸαšΎαš· αš¨αšΎα›ž α›‹α›αš¨αš±αš΄,
α›αšΊα›–αš€ α›‹αšΊαš¨αš±α›–α›ž α›šα›Ÿαš‘α›– α›‹α›Ÿ αš‘α›–αš±αš€ α›‹α›αš±α›ŸαšΎαš·,
α›αšΊαš¨α› ᛁᛏ αšΉαš¨α›‹ αš²α›ŸαšΎα›‹α›α›žα›–αš±α›–α›ž α›α›Ÿ α›’α›– αšΉαš±α›ŸαšΎαš·.

α›α›Ÿ α›–αšΎα›–α›—αš€ α›ˆαš±α›α›žα›–α›‹ α›αšΊα›–αš€ α›’α›–α›šα›ŸαšΎαš·,
α›αšΊα›– α›αšΉα›Ÿ αš²α›Ÿαš’α›šα›ž α›ŸαšΎα›šαš€ α›šα›ŸαšΎαš·,
αš α›Ÿαš± ᚨᚾ α›–α›‹αš²αš¨α›ˆα›– α›‹α›Ÿ αš·αš±α›–αš¨α›,
ᛁᛏ αšΉαš¨α›‹ α›ŸαšΎα›šαš€ αš αš¨α›α›–.

α›ŸαšΎ ᚨ α›žαš±α›–αš¨αš±αš€ αšΎα›αš·αšΊα› α›αšΊα›–αš€ αš α›šα›–α›ž,
α›α›Ÿ α›ŸαšΎα›šαš€ α›’α›– αš²α›ŸαšΎα›‹α›α›žα›–αš±α›–α›ž α›žα›–αš¨α›ž,
α›α›Ÿαš·α›–α›αšΊα›–αš± α›αšΊα›–αš€ αš α›Ÿαš’αšΎα›ž ᚨ αšΉα›Ÿα›Ÿα›ž,
αš¨αšΎα›ž α›’α›–α›šα›ŸαšΉ α›αšΊα›– αš α›Ÿαš±α›–α›‹α› α›‹α›α›Ÿα›Ÿα›ž,
ᚨ α›α›–α›—α›ˆα›šα›– α›žα›–α›žα›αš²αš¨α›α›–α›ž α›α›Ÿ αš¨αšΎαš’α›’α›α›‹,
α›αšΎ α›αšΊαš¨α› α›—α›Ÿα›—α›–αšΎα› α›αšΊα›–αš€ αš΄αšΎα›–αšΉ α›αšΊα›–αš€ αšΊαš¨α›ž α›α›Ÿ α›žα›Ÿ α›αšΊα›α›‹. '

Below the void-like idol stood a few cubs, inspecting the scripture and muttering between themselves. On their small faces were looks of confusion as they attempted to solve a mystery that only they knew of and knew the resolution of - or what they'd like to call the resolution. Then, one of the cubs began to speak.
`` So.. if mom and dad were apart of enemy prides, why didn't one of the pride's move away to stop being mean to the other one? Problem solved! ``
`` No, no, no! `` Came another one. `` It doesn't work like that! What if they couldn't move ANYWHERE and HAD to stay there? ``
`` Couldn't they have said sorry and then gone on with life? ``
`` Yes, they could've BUT then mom and dad wouldn't have met.. ``
`` Oh.. `` From around the Monument came a different cub, not one of either Raven or Rarity's. The bundle of cubs began to then back away from the cub, and they all screeched in unison.

`` OUTSIDER! ``



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Edited on 03/04/24 @ 14:00:54 by Vance_ (#262547)

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2024-04-03 13:58:57
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No worries, just please use credits if you are to use it.



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PALE_BIRD (#248597)

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2024-04-03 14:03:49
Thanks!



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Vance_ (#262547)

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2024-04-03 14:05:04
@PALE_BIRD (#248597)

It's no problem! I loved the last bit where they all screamed 'OUTSIDER', I read it to my grammy and she found it very funny XD



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PALE_BIRD (#248597)

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2024-04-03 14:05:36
I laughed so hard, its amazing!



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2024-04-03 14:06:35
@PALE_BIRD

OUTSIDERRRRRRRRRRR!



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PALE_BIRD (#248597)

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2024-04-03 14:09:01
OUTSIDER!
If I add onto the lore, THAT will be a common thing. Also now I imagine the adult kids of my king screaming outsider with the cubs.
Just, a new sibling? No, OUTSIDER



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