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Velvet (#465211)

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2024-04-20 12:17:04

WRITING BIOGRAPHY AND LORE COMMISSIONS!

WRITING COMMISSIONS

Hello guys! I am just opening my writing commissions. Under the cut, you will find all the pricing, rules and also my writing range (with an example so you can openly check my style). As a background, in real-life I am a psychology student who also worked as a Head Editor (back in Highschool) for the School’s magazine. I am also a fanfic writer and I am familiar with animal role-play, even if I no longer do it.

Here are my rules:

* I do NOT do sexual content, so please refrain from it.
* Anything non-consensual or dub-con is prohibited.
* I DO WRITE graphic and GORE scenes, but if you want a specific violent scene without much gore, I can definitely work around it or leave a nice cliffhanger that “something bad happened”.
* Character deaths and angst are definitely up my alley– that being said, cub/child deaths and violence is allowed (after all, we all know nature isn’t all kind).
* Depending on how big the commission is, there will be different waiting times (I have a job and university to deal with, so please be understanding that I am trying my best). I will talk to you in private about the waiting time BUT usually it is around 7-8 days UNLESS I have a real life issue and then I will let you know (but hopefully, this is not gonna be necessary). If your commission is done EARLIER, it will be sent earlier.
* DO NOT commission what you DO NOT have!
* You can ask for my advice when it comes to specific psychological effects after certain events (THAT would be fun for me to write!)
* With your commission, you can do whatever you want, but I do want to be tagged when you use it, at least in a small corner. That would be a sign that you love and respect my work.
* I won’t change my prices and I do NOT accept lions, applicators or other items.
* I will leave a Google Form for you to fill in PM once you request a commission and I accept it so I can have all my commissions nicely organised. Any confusion regarding your commission will be discussed in private.
* I have a very busy life so please do not rush me! You will get blocked and I will just move on to the next spot.
* PAYMENT comes first. I seriously do not want to spend a whole hour writing something and get nothing in return ): These can be very time consuming, especially when it comes to big commissions.

Commission Spots and Timing:

I have 4 slots free per Week. They refresh and update based on when I finish said commission. If you do NOT catch a spot, I will put you on the waiting list for NEXT week. The waiting list has 2 SPOTS.

SLOTS PER WEEK:
1 - Bear (#97728)
2 - Jazziest Creature (#36243)
3 -
4 - ShaydeWanderer (#171201)

WAITING LIST:

1-
2 -

Types of Commissions:

Biography Introductions

A short introduction for your Lion. It will be in third person, as if the reader just met your Lion and it starts an interaction (most of the time it can contain a beautiful description of the Lion’s physical traits, aura and demeanour, it can show a typical/specific activity that your Lion is known for or enjoys and a dialogue).

Biography Lore/ Character Backstory

Based on your own ideas and whatever else you commission, I will write a whole character backstory for your Lion, whether it is heroic or villainous. The character story can be as simple or as complex as you want and it can also be related to other characters/lions you own too.

Den Introductions

As simple as it is: a den introduction for you. I can write something “historical” about your territory, describe the scenery and atmosphere of the place or specific encounters with members from your pride. It can contain more characters/lions than just one.

Pride Lore

Based on your own pride and whatever else you might desire, I will make a simple or complex pride lore. It will obviously contain more information about your characters/lions and it can range from pure angsty disaster to a stunning landscape made out of years of victories.

Pricing based off of word count AND types of commissions:

TIER 1:

Biography Introductions AND Den Introductions

200-500 words -> 500SB

600-800 words -> 1GB

TIER 2:

Biography Lore/ Character Backstory AND Pride Lore

200-500 words -> 500SB

600-800 words -> 1GB

900-1K words -> 2GB

1.2 - 1.6K words -> 5GB

1.6 - 2K words -> 8GB

Here is it a short example of a Biography Story I made for one of my favourite lionesses and my Queen:

The distant, shrinking sound of a vulture’s laugh has been replaying in her mind, taunting her for the longest time. Despite being annoying, mocking even, it is the sole reason she was kicked back to reality, her senses slowly pushing her to wake up. She could feel her entire body burn, her muscles sore and painful from something she barely remembers. Beautiful, sunglow eyes opened, revealing to her nothing else but the blinding light of the sun, as well as the dusty terrain of the savannah. How long was she knocked out here for? Memories are barely flashing through her mind, as a strong headache booms through her skull like a drum. The inside of her mouth was dry, her lower body twitching every now and then. Looking over to her claws, dried blood stained them in a dark, burgundy color. She couldn’t recall if it was hers or someone else’s. Whatever happened, it is now over.
“You’re finally awake,” a voice cut through the stillness of the savannah, ripping her away from her thoughts.
As she glanced over to the side, just a few feet away from her right stood another lioness. Khan did not recognise her. She has never met such a beauty, a deep brown fur shining brighter in the sun, almost chocolate like. Her paws were as white as petalite, nicely groomed despite the ground being rougher than the rest. Glowing panther markings could define the lioness standing next to her as nothing else but unusual, her entire being captivating. Amethyst eyes bore into her, but did not seem to hold any malice. A warning growl escaped Khan’s chest, but the other lioness did not seem phased.
“Spare me the antics, pretty girl. No matter your size and mottled stripes, I fear no feline with tiger heritage. Consider me the bearer of good news: you managed to rid me of that plastering pack of hyenas,” her front paw pushed forward to Khan a gazelle carcass, the meat looking as fresh as it can be - that poor being died less than an hour ago.
Khan’s eyes fell on the carcass, caught in a daze. As soon as it came into her reach, she grabbed it away forcefully, sinking her teeth into it. She had long forgotten when was the last time she got a proper meal. The lioness in front of her chuckled softly, her voice dripping with honey.
“Take this as a reward for your hard work, though it was a foolish choice. No lion can stand their ground properly against those many hyenas. Your skills are truly admirable.”
Khan scoffed, continuing her meal. She could easily recognise the scent: though she never knew how she ended up in this part of the savannah, she definitely entered a stranger’s territory. The lioness’ scent has been around ever since she stepped foot in it: it must belong to her.
“Leading a pride as a lioness? Are you sure who is the foolish one between the two of us?” replied Khan, her voice coming out raspier than usual.
“I’ve been here for over three years, and no male managed to replace me. I’d consider this a good sign. My girls entrusted me with their lives and I will not ruin their hopes. However, another fighter in the pride does not sound disappointing.”
“Spit it out.”
“How about I make you an offer you cannot refuse: you join me, and you will not starve under the cruel sun ever again.”
“Why would I give you my loyalty so easily?”
Chocapic smirked as she got up, swaying gently to Khan’s side.
“Compared to others, I find dirty, chased lionesses quite… attractive.”

(612 words)

Example 2 (a commission made for Tez):

She could feel the soft breeze of dawn brush into her fur, as the birds chirped around her endlessly. The sky has never been more beautiful, different hues of purple and orange melting harmoniously into the perfect design, the day’s aura turning the territory into something that can be described as nothing else other than heavenly. Her ear twitched every now and then into pure concentration, P-Body’s small and somehow fluffy frame curling into a ball. Despite her roundness, her tail was flickering, visibly annoyed by the pied kingfisher circling her, almost amused by the image in front of him. Right behind her, also in a crouched position, her mother watched with patience over the young cub, her sweet and melodic voice whispering into her baby’s ear.
“No rush. Wait until the winds stop blowing behind you. This way, no prey is going to feel your scent. You’re already blending so well with the rocks.”
P-Body gave her mother a quick nod, arching her back as her little legs softly pounded the ground in expectation. Before her, just a few meters away, stood a few ostrich chicks, their long legs stepping over the taller grass, helping them move with ease, completely unaware of the miniature, stripped terror waiting for a wrong move. One of the birds, distracted by a colorful grasshopper, quickly charged before it. The perfect opportunity. With a final jump, P-Body’s claws made contact with the speckled feathers, pinning her prey to the ground and preparing to swiftly end its life in one excellent strike to the weakest point– until she heard a yell.
“I’ve found it! I’ve found it! Look!”
Caught off guard, P-Body had no time to react properly and dodge the speeding cub, as it was already too late. Another small body crashed right into hers, sending her rolling down the kopje, both of them hitting hill after hill until they ended up crashing into the thick, purple bushes. Aphrodite stood in shock, her beautiful sunglow eyes widening as she watched her twins tumbling like a ball of twigs and dust during a desert sandstorm. She quickly jumped down the rocky hills, listening to the distressed mewing of the two cubs until she found them unharmed, but visibly dizzy and confused. Atlas, the troublemaker of the family, stood upside down on a rock, her body slowly sliding down on top of her sister’s, earning a surprised sound from her. Aphrodite pawed gently at the two.
“Does anything hurt?”
Atlas was supposed to join the lesson too, but she quickly sneaked out somewhere into the jungle, too attentive to the senegal bird which she was supposed to stalk. Somehow, little Atlas never fails to test Aphrodite’s patience or her protectiveness: and Atlas always wins. Disappointed, but not surprised, the stunning tigon mother grabbed Atlas by the back of her neck gently and placed her back on her shaky paws. As soon as the cub’s paws were lifted from the ground, something fell out of her mouth. Her sister and her mother looked confused at what the remains looked like.
“What did you eat?”
P-Body nudged it with curiosity as she commented:
“A mushroom…”
Aphrodite let out a small, mildly annoyed growl.
“Atlas…again?”
The murky tigon licked her toe, trying to relieve a small itch caused by the bush she fell into just a few moments ago, her citrine eyes having a mischievous glint in them.
“I apologise…”
P-Body couldn’t help, but let out a childish laugh, throwing herself on top of her sister, her sunkissed fur brushing over her twins.
“You know I could never stay mad at you…”

(603 words)

Genres to pick from:

Fantasy -> can have a specific theme like royalty etc.
Natural -> by natural I mean the closest thing to a lion living in our world, but from their perspective
Thriller -> can contain graphic descriptions and gore
Romantic -> is focused on a specific love story
Drama -> can contain a bit out of all the previous ones, depending on the idea
Angst -> …well, I think we all know how that one works
NO specific genre -> this is going to be allowed only for SMALL introductions that focus more on describing a Lion or a place.

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Edited on 30/04/24 @ 02:24:53 by Velvet (#465211)

Tez (#258569)

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2024-04-20 12:20:03

Tez (#258569)

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2024-04-20 12:20:03

#304446395531

Hi!
I'd like to get a biography comission for my twin tigons!
https://www.lioden.com/lion.php?id=794213633616
and
https://www.lioden.com/lion.php?id=794213633617

They were my first gon twins and I'd like lore reflecting their decor/personalities!

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Velvet (#465211)

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2024-04-20 12:22:04

Velvet (#465211)

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2024-04-20 12:22:04

#304446395535

Noted ^^ Got the first spot. --> Updated

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SixSs (#110247)

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2024-04-21 01:54:24

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2024-04-21 01:54:24

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Hello ^^ I saw this and thought it'd be interesting :0

I would like a lion backstory for both my main and side account please

https://www.lioden.com/lion.php?mid=113320

For him I have an idea of him being an outcast the moment he was born, for being a ferus, a terrifying presence for the other lions. Even his mother and siblings shunned him. When he was a year old he was chased away from his pride and set to wander the world. EVentually, he found himself in a deserted, frozen wasteland. Food was extremely scarce with frozen trees, bodies, and skeletons buried amongst the snow. There was a constant blizard raging apon the land that only chilled him even more. In this hell on Earth, he managed to find a cave just big enough for him to fit in and hide from the cold. He stayed in this land for years to come, and while food was hard to find, it wasn't impossible for a loner like him. The cold any the food were just minor inconveniences at this point as he's grown used to it. He also oddly found comfort in what others would see as torture. Because while yes, he was alone, he saw better this way. He wasn't mocked or ridiculed anymore, he wasn't shamed or shunned, he wouldn't bother anyone in this place... he was at peace here in his loneliness. He was content. He liked his wasteland.

(I'm not exactly sure what you could do with this, so I'm not sure what word count i should get? I can afford 2

each for both of these story lines, just lmk what you think would be best for both of them and i'll go with that)

Now onto my side!

https://www.lioden.com/lion.php?mid=110247

I'm not exactly sure where to go with this, but I have a sort of, half-baked idea... Basically, sweet rose had a rough childhood where he couldn't trust anyone... his mother, siblings, pridemates, etc. The reason being is that they were all very manipulative and cunning and would get him to do things he didn't to do through these manipulative tactics. Thus, Sweet Rose had to grow up never trusting others and having to be manipulative himself to get out of bad situations.

(I'm not exactly sure what to add onto that, and sorry that it's kind of half-baked. SInce you're the writer, i'll let you take off with it. I have a more envisioned story of Frost King than I do Sweet Rose

. Hope it doesn;t make it harder for you >.<)

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Edited on 21/04/24 @ 01:55:13 by SixSs (#110247)

Velvet (#465211)

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2024-04-21 03:05:15

Velvet (#465211)

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Hello! Wonderful ideas. Imma update that you took the spot and then I will PM you so we can discuss details in Private! I'm really excited for them <3

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TheCrazyGiraffeLady (#47268)

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2024-04-21 09:04:45

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2024-04-21 09:04:45

#304446396703

Hello!
Just a quick question first off, if that’s alright. I understand these are aimed more towards Lioden lions, but would you be open to doing something for an offsite OC (still feline but just not Lioden linked)?
Naturally no worries if not.
Thank you for your time and have a great day!
TCGL

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Velvet (#465211)

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2024-04-21 10:14:46

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Hello! I definitely wouldn’t mind so, as most of the pricing is based off of word count. As long as you provide me with enough information, I can do it. ^^

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2024-04-21 10:40:42

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2024-04-21 10:40:42

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Perfect thank you ^^

In that case, could I get a character backstory for Robin please - https://toyhou.se/25876407.robin

I would love to get it themed around her plotting her revenge against Alix, her former lover and partner in crime/plan to take over the world. So it’s a mix of romance, betrayal and revenge (with a touch of madness thrown in if I’m honest).

For reference, this is Alix - https://toyhou.se/22669297.alix

Alix and Robin had been the perfect time; Alix was the brains and Robin was the brawn in their plans for global domination. But once they put their plan into action, it all went wrong so quickly. Robin told Alix to run, and Alix promised to come back for her, but that was a lie. Alix left and Robin was captured. She rotted in jail for years, plotting her revenge when she would finally be released. When she wasn’t planning, Robin was busy conquering the prison - twas how she got the scars across her once flawless face.

Years of plotting revenge, imagining destroying everything your former lover and you had worked so hard for, does something to one’s mind - the fantasies got stranger the longer Robin plotted, but deep down she knew the truth; forever would she love Alix, and never could she actually harm her.

Not sure if this sounds alright with you - let me know if you would be willing to work on such a thing so no worries if not! If yes, then happy to let you have free reign on the length as I can afford up to your highest amount (8GB) so no worries there ^^

Have a wonderful day!

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2024-04-21 12:37:36

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I will definitely accept it. I will update that you got the spot. Meanwhile, Imma send u a PM to talk about other questions I have about the characters so I can start it asap.

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2024-04-22 07:19:38

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Small side note for people who commissioned: at some point, based on my real life schedule, I will update you on the fact that I indeed started working on your commission (because I can understand that me not sending you any PMs regarding it might be weird). Thank you for your patience!

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ShaydeWanderer
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2024-04-26 09:56:05

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Heya! If possible I'd love to grab a slot if possible for both a den introduction and pride lore ^^

I can't really provide too much information outside of featured lions at the moment since I'm at school, but I'm more than happy to dm you with what ideas I do have when I get home ^^

Soleil's bodyguard/partner(?): Ember
The pride's shaman: TBN
The pride's healers (mother and daughter): Iris and Hesper
The shaman's apprentice: Lightbringer (placeholder name?)

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Velvet (#465211)

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2024-04-26 10:12:47

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Hello Shayde! I'd be more than happy for you to grab the next spot! I will update you on the list. I will PM you about the ideas, and you can reply anytime you are free. ^^

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⚡️Bear⚡️ (#97728)
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2024-04-29 10:17:53

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Hello! I would love to order/obtain a slot.

However, would it be possible to discuss over Discord? Would be a bit easier for me.
if not, no worries! LD dms would be fine.

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2024-04-29 10:22:41

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Hello, Bear! I will update that you take the slot and we can discuss on discord. Send me your tag ^^

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Edited on 29/04/24 @ 10:22:52 by Velvet (#465211)