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| Posted by | Slippery Tongue decor. (Need opinions!) |
 Maddoka (#32368) Deathlord of the Jungle View Forum Posts  Posted on 2014-12-07 06:55:22 |
Hulluwz all! So I decided to make a decor, because I wanted it for my future king. So I grabbed my sister's tablet, opened GIMP and downloaded the lion file. I actually had never really made digital art before... But I think it turned out nice. ;3 Not so Final version So I made the final versions for all stages, and I think they turned out well. I am now waiting for the decor to get accepted. When the mods accept it, I will keep one decor myself. I will put one in a 50SB raffle, and I will auction the other one off. If people still want this decor when the two I'm raffling/selling are gone, I will create more one request. Update: Well Xylax rejected it because of many reasons so I have to change the tongue. :I I'm not sure how yet, so I'd be REALLY glad if some people can give some tips. Screenshots of all stages: Newborn  Young cub  Cubbeh  Female adol  Female  M adol  Male  Opninions! I'd still like to get opinions on this decor, so tell me what you think about it if you feel like it. ;3 Note: I can take negativity towards the thing I made. If you think it's the ugliest thing you've ever seen in your whole life, feel free to tell me. But please, tell me the reason why so I can learn from it. ;3  0 players like this post! Like? Edited on 22/01/15 by Maddoka (#32368) |
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Polarity (#39631)
Graceful View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-07 07:10:26 |
1. oh my gosh yes! i wish had enough GB to get it once your done ;u; 2. the shading is beautiful! and the shape is <3 but in my opinion it looks a little to pink but other than that i love it the way it is uwu 3. i dont think you should change anything! everything's so nice, except the pinkness but that doesn't matter : > 4. im usually broke on SB and GB cx but if i was blessed with them i would pay 10 GB 5. yes! it suits well! 0 players like this post! Like? |
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Maddoka (#32368)
Deathlord of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-07 07:14:20 |
Thanks Neo. ^^ I can make it a bit darker if more people think it's too pink. My sister also mentioned it was a bit too bright, and it actually was brighter before. xp So if it gets mentioned more times, I'll see if it looks better when it's less pink. (Maybe I could even make it in different colours. xp Like green or something.) 0 players like this post! Like? |
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Luckyclaw (#20118)
Lone Wanderer View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-07 07:16:19 |
You should call it the 'Kiss' tongue, because it looks just like that guy from that band. 0 players like this post! Like? |
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Maddoka (#32368)
Deathlord of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-07 07:16:47 |
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Fakelamb {Side} (#12714)
Notable Lion View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-07 07:18:19 |
I just has one question; WHOS KING IS THAT MODELING?! 0 players like this post! Like?Edited on 07/12/14 by Wolfie {= (#12714) |
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Maddoka (#32368)
Deathlord of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-07 07:20:59 |
I am going to customize this boy into the lion that is modeling. ;p It will be my next king. ^^ 0 players like this post! Like? |
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Fakelamb {Side} (#12714)
Notable Lion View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-07 07:39:35 |
OOH. Then i ill bookmark your page until he becomes king so I can stud to him cx 0 players like this post! Like? |
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Maddoka (#32368)
Deathlord of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-07 07:41:28 |
XD Okayz. It will probably take a little while before he becomes king because I am not going to early retire my king. So anyone has opinions about the decor instead of the model? ;p 0 players like this post! Like? |
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doge fruit (#45943)
View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-07 08:41:47 |
I really do love it it would go perfect with the Demon Horns I have in my hoard but I think since it's a demon tongue and most but not all depictions of demons with their tongue sticking, the tongue is usually black and forked. I don't have any GB and I'll never purchase none, I think it would go for at least 2-3 GB. 0 players like this post! Like? |
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Maddoka (#32368)
Deathlord of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-07 08:45:26 |
Black and forked... Most demon tongues I have seen were pink but well, haven't met that many demons. xp I was also thinking about calling it 'Snake tongue' or 'Lizard tongue' but those also have forked tongues. I was thinking about marking the tongue forked for females, and not for males. So there is a slight difference between genders, not sure if I will do that tho. Thanks for your opinion and all. ^^ 0 players like this post! Like? |
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Lukio (#7391)
Deathlord of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-07 08:56:07 |
1. Not really, sorry. 2. It looks great BUT is not believable. 3. You need to raise and lower the lip above and below the tongue. Right now, it looks to papery and thin. You may also consider changing the color to a more "demonic" color like red or black. However, I adore the shading and movement. It is excellently drawn and just needs a little more work. :) 4. Eh, 4GB? 5. You may want to change to name to appeal to more people, but otherwise, that name is fine. Perhaps...Slippery Tongue instead? 0 players like this post! Like? |
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Maddoka (#32368)
Deathlord of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-07 09:14:58 |
I am not sure if I can move the lips. 0-0 I cab try but I think I will fail misserably. X3 but it's a good idea. I'm happy that you tell me what you think about it even tho you don't like the idea of the decor. Thanks. ^^ 0 players like this post! Like? |
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kaonashi (#50385)
King of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-08 04:28:26 |
To me it looks less like a demon tongue and more like a lion tongue that went a bit weird. I'd say make it narrower and more snakey, or add a gradient so the tongue's tip is an unnatural color, like blood-red or black. Maybe eyedropper in a color from one of the more infernal-looking pelt bases for that :D 0 players like this post! Like? |
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Maddoka (#32368)
Deathlord of the Jungle View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-08 04:32:04 |
That sounds cool, kaonashi, but it actually wasn't really suposed to be a demon tongue. I just don't really know how to name it otherwise. (I think the name Lukio said, slippery tongue might work too.) I just wanted to make a long pointed tongue for my next king, and wanted to know what others would think about it. It would be nice if I could sell it to others. Thanks for your tips. ^^ 0 players like this post! Like? |
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mau | g1 6k frontal 3ros cel (#32469) 
Impeccable View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-08 04:40:13 |
Honestly, I think the shape and color work just fine, and I would love a forked version for females ouo I have a demon-y themed lioness, and it'd suit her well ^^ That being said, I do agree the tongue looks a bit flat at the base. I'd draw over the top lip a bit to give it more volume and help it follow the shape of the tongue, if that makes sense? c: Great work so far, though ^^ 0 players like this post! Like?Edited on 08/12/14 by Maulise | Autumn Floof (#32469) |
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