Posted by Slippery Tongue decor. (Need opinions!)

Maddoka (#32368)

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Posted on
2014-12-07 06:55:22

Hulluwz all!


So I decided to make a decor, because I wanted it for my future king. So I grabbed my sister's tablet, opened GIMP and downloaded the lion file. I actually had never really made digital art before... But I think it turned out nice. ;3

Not so Final version


So I made the final versions for all stages, and I think they turned out well. I am now waiting for the decor to get accepted. When the mods accept it, I will keep one decor myself. I will put one in a 50SB raffle, and I will auction the other one off. If people still want this decor when the two I'm raffling/selling are gone, I will create more one request.
Update:
Well Xylax rejected it because of many reasons so I have to change the tongue. :I I'm not sure how yet, so I'd be REALLY glad if some people can give some tips.

Screenshots of all stages:
Newborn
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Young cub
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Cubbeh
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Female adol
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Female
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M adol
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Male
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Opninions!


I'd still like to get opinions on this decor, so tell me what you think about it if you feel like it. ;3

Note: I can take negativity towards the thing I made. If you think it's the ugliest thing you've ever seen in your whole life, feel free to tell me. But please, tell me the reason why so I can learn from it. ;3



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Edited on 22/01/15 by Maddoka (#32368)

Maddoka (#32368)

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Posted on
2014-12-08 04:46:53
Thankies Maulise, I'm currently working on the cub version and it's done-ish. I'm going to put it in this post too now. Then I'll edit the female version so it look better and after that I'll try to make the male tongue look less flat. Thanks for the feedback. ^^



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2014-12-08 04:51:59
Happy I could help c: It's almost there, it just looks like there's a bit too much black on the top lip, almost like it's part of the tongue, haha c: Good luck! ^^

EDIT: The cub version is too cute :D Love that you'd made use of the open mouth <3



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Edited on 08/12/14 by Maulise | Autumn Floof (#32469)

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Posted on
2014-12-08 05:47:24
Looking a lot better :D Nice work ^u^



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Maddoka (#32368)

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Posted on
2014-12-08 05:48:04
Thank you so much for all the feedback. Really usefull for me. ^^ Glad you like the way it looks. :3



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Icy (#2810)

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2014-12-08 08:59:50
1. Are you interested in a decor of a demon tongue? Why are you or are ya not?
Honestly, not really. Reason being it wouldn't really fit into my realistic pride. n_n

2. Do you think it looks nice? Or does it look horrible or anything?
I think the colour and shading are very nice, however I feel there is a bit of flaw with the tongue itself, which i'll explain below as best as I can ^^;

3. Any tips to make it look better?(I am not a professional artist, so I might not really know how to make it better. And maybe I simply can't. But any tip can help me I think. ^^)
I think the base of the tongue is just too thick for it's length. You know how snakes have really long pointy tongues, along with giraffes, anteaters, etc? All of those tongues are similar proportion through out the tongue, because muscle is needed to lift and move it about. Right now for this tongue, it seems very flat and thin and more like the lion is holding a piece of cloth between it's lips. I think this is just because the base of the tongue is massive, and the tip is tiny, yet the dimension is the same through out. I think you could remedy this by
1. Making the base of the tongue more narrow. It doesn't have to be by a lot, but to narrow the base would make the tongue more believable as an actual tongue.
2. or add more bulk to the bottom/sides of the tongue, so it looks less paper thin.

These are only suggestions though ^_^

4. How much would you pay for it? Or think it's worth,if you are not interested in buying it.
I think a good honest price would be between 4-6GB.

5. Shall I call the decor 'Demon Tongue'?
Call it whatever you like! However, I would imagine a demon tongue being much darker and creepy looking. Perhaps something like "Long licker" or "reptilian tongue" might be more appropriate, because it's so pink and nice looking. n_n



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Posted on
2014-12-08 09:03:11
Would so buy you should make a decor also that is a shorter tongue with like piercings



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Maddoka (#32368)

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2014-12-08 09:03:12
I see what you mean Icy, with the base being to thick and all. I can see if I can do anything about that to change it. I didn't really notice it yet, so thanks for pointing that out. ^^ Long licker sounds pretty funny, that could be a good name for it. ;p



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Posted on
2014-12-08 09:07:41
1. Are you interested in a decor of a demon tongue? Why are you or are ya not?: I would be interested, though I don't really buy decors.
2. Do you think it looks nice? Or does it look horrible or anything?: I like it! Especially the cub one.
3. Any tips to make it look better?: It might look better with a more natural color, the pink is a bit overpowering. Also, perhaps change the color of the lineart slightly, to reflect the color of the tongue itself.
4. How much would you pay for it?: At least 4 Gb(since you get three copies if I am correct, and have to make the 10 worth it.)
5. Shall I call the decor 'Demon Tongue'?: Yes, unless you find a witty rewording of the same idea.



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Maddoka (#32368)

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2014-12-08 16:49:22
Sorry, late reply. Fell asleep. ;p)

Thanks for the feedback, Possibly Poopular CopyCatCLown. ^^



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2014-12-08 19:30:06
1. Are you interested in a decor of a demon tongue? Why are you or are ya not?
No, I am personally not. I plan to have a realistic pride so no real place for demon tongues.

2. Do you think it looks nice? Or does it look horrible or anything?
I think it looks nice. Better than what I could manage!

3. Any tips to make it look better?(I am not a professional artist, so I might not really know how to make it better. And maybe I simply can't. But any tip can help me I think. ^^)
I think it would help to have the male and female's mouth appear "open" a little? Like a peek of the tips of their teeth maybe so it looks like they're opening their mouth to extend the tongue, not just kind of holding it with their lips.

4. How much would you pay for it? Or think it's worth,if you are not interested in buying it.
I'm not really sure. I don't know much about the pricing for such things.

5. Shall I call the decor 'Demon Tongue'?
I think that name works. It does remind me of Asian-style demons.




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Maddoka (#32368)

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2014-12-08 19:34:38
I tried to make the mouth look more open, but I guess it didn't work out. Xp thanks for the feedback. ^^



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Sphinx | Regal Sepia (#50934)


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2014-12-08 19:46:43
I'm probably not explaining too well.

I was thinking something like this, but less exaggerated than in the photo.

flehmen-response-tiger.jpg

Where the tips of the teeth show a little? It would make it easier to see that the mouth is opening. Maybe add a little wrinkle or two over the cheeks for effect?



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Maddoka (#32368)

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2014-12-08 21:27:42
I'm not sure if I can do something close to that. I can try adding teeth, I did that with the male adol version(Which is not completely done yet. ;p)



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2014-12-08 21:29:13
Well, not that extreme, Maddoka. That's just the best picture I could find to show the movements of the muzzle when they stick their tongue out. I was thinking something much more subtle.



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Maddoka (#32368)

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2014-12-08 21:33:07
Yeah I understand it shouldn't be that extreme, but I just don't know if I can really add wrinkles to the muzzle and stuff. But I can try.



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