May I redline, Jessica? c:

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Redline?

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Redline- Draw over digitally with red lines to show correctly how to do a few things c:

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No thanks. I am happy with how it looks. Thanks for asking though

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Jessica, MLP characters don't have tiny rears though...

Click here, the photo was large so I decided not to post it

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Alright, though I strongly suggest having someone do that for you.

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I agree with what everyone else said. The anatomy is strange, too much fur makes it look odd, etc. etc. etc., you've heard it all before. And yes... it looks more like a mouse than a lion.

But it's still very cute. It only needs a couple edits to look better - simple edits, really - and then I can totally see lots of people buying it! ^^ Once improved, I could see it going anywhere from 100-300 SB, if you're planning on doing custom recolors for people. I'm sure tons of people would love it c:

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Ok i'll work on your advice on the digital version.

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UPDATE

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im gonna stick with the first one. Apart from the bottom.

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Ah, it's much better already, though the muzzle is still a bit too long. It's way cute though, looks cleaner ^^

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i did that quickly. Ill do the rest tommorow.

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Yes, it definitely looks a lot cleaner. You fixed a lot of the issues and it looks pretty good now!

For pricing I'm still saying 100 to 200 SB, maybe a bit more expensive. I've always priced my stuff cheap anyways so...

Perhaps you could charge in different increments for more detailed re-colors and such.

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yeah

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Love the update! Only one thing. I know it's a chibi, but I suggest you change the angle of the eye, rotate it a bit. :3 Just a suggestion ;)

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