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2020-09-18 13:22:38
for #89350 and #142785 only, please dont comment if you arent one of us

when four clans' territories are threatened by human activity, they must send warriors to find new lands - before their way of life is destroyed forever.

BLANDCLAN
BlandClan is a group of cats living in the swamps surrounding The Hellish Hinterlands, otherwise known as BlazeClan territory. They normally get stormy weather, and live on a hill where it can't flood. The hill has an ancient willow tree growing on it, its roots creating dens for each cat. The predators are alligators, black bears, and coypu. They feed on Marsh wrens, Swamp sparrows, Yellow-bellied fly catcher, and more birds and fish. They have mildly cold (no snow or ice) winters, warm springs, hot summers, and warm autumns. They worship a rain goddess.
Ruler: Swiftstar, a gray tabby tom with amber eyes and two scars on his left shoulder.
Deputy: Mothglow, a tortoiseshell molly with amber eyes and a scar on her flank.
Medicine cat: Birchclaw, a brown tabby-and-white molly with amber eyes.

BLAZECLAN
-BlazeClan is a group of cats that live in the desert in the middle of the four territories. They have an oasis in the middle where all four Clans meet up monthly. Their desert is also called The Hellish Hinterlands, but to them its home. In the Winter its only a little cold (no snow or ice) , hot in the Spring, and super hot in the Summer, while hot in the Autumn. The predators are rattlesnakes, sand cats, deathstalkers, owls, scorpions, and more. Their prey are meerkat, hamsters, sand-grouse, jerboa, kangaroo rats, gerbils, and bats. They worship a desert goddess.
Ruler: Horizonstar, a tortoiseshell molly with dark green eyes and ginger ears.
Deputy: Tinyclaw, a ginger-and-silver tom with dark blue eyes.
Medicine cat: Sandeye, a dark brown tom with gray flecks and blue eyes.

CHASMCLAN
live inside a ravine, their territory encompasses the whole thing, even the part reaching into eveclan. the ravine has a river down the middle which is their sole source of water. the ravine's walls are rocky and sloping; to either side is an expanse of rock-strewn ground, not really worth exploring
most chasmclan cats spend their whole life inside the ravine, hunting up and down the river. they mainly eat lizards, birds, and rodents; their main predators are foxes and mountain lions, who live further north in the ravine (where cats are prohibited from going).
chasmclan society prioritizes family and friendship. they're tightly-knit, believing that the only way to survive in the harsh ravine is to lean on your fellow cats for support. all resources are shared among clanmates and to keep secrets is to betray the clan.
chasmclan cats tend to be sociable, resourceful, and determined. they worship a sun goddess.
leader: graystar - sleek gray she-cat with yellow eyes
deputy: rattlesneer - tortoiseshell she-cat with amber eyes
medicine cat: scorpiontail - brown tabby tom with hazel eyes

EVECLAN
live on a stretch of rocky terrain and short, stunted grass. part of chasmclan's ravine stretches onto their land, which they dislike. they recieve water from a small rain-fed pool near their camp, which is situated in a cave beneath a rocky overhang. the whole territory is very open and exposed.
eveclan cats are nocturnal, since the lack of shelter on their land results in the sun being very dangerous. they wake up around sunset, hunt and patrol throughout the night, and go to sleep as the sun rises again. they mainly eat snakes, lizards, beetles, and birds (and the odd bat that gets into their camp). their main predators are coyotes and rattlesnakes.
eveclan society is focused heavily on folklore, related mostly to the moon and stars. they see the sun as an evil figure. they are very close to clanmates, but dislike strangers, and defend their borders ferociously - they cant risk losing any hunting ground.
eveclan cats tend to be disagreeable, skilled, and confident. they worship a moon goddess.
leader: bugstar - black tom with brown eyes and a large scar on his muzzle
deputy: duskpatch - dilute tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes
medicine cat: poolheart - pale gray tom with darker patches and blue eyes

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Edited on 12/10/20 @ 07:07:38 by wormwood🏳️‍🌈 (#142785)

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2020-10-22 17:38:38
(OOOOH thats so cool :0 i love unique meeting spots)

Brittlepaw nodded, taking in his advice. "Of course. Thanks again, I hope you have a good night." She began trotting down the path to camp, meeting Tinyclaw at the bottom, Gulchclaw at her side. She waved her tail at the deputy. "We're on our way to the Moon Sapling. Do we have permission to return here when we're done?"



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2020-10-22 19:37:22
Tinyclaw nodded, "Of course, you've done us a great favor," he referenced how Brittlepaw helped save Swiftfeather.
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Swiftfeather trilled as her father came up to her, rubbing up against his chest. He groomed her cheek and whispered lovingly before Swiftfeather could explain why she was leaving, "Whatever you need to do, do it," and walked away.
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Sharpdawn hid her leg as every cat stared in astonishment at Swiftfeather.
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[Lol, it is? i thought it was kinda cringeworthy]



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(nah i like it!!! starclans mysterious and is already confirmed to affect the living world so i think it makes sense)

Brittlepaw beamed at the deputy's support. Gulchclaw smiled, too, appreciating the tom's kind words. They waited patiently for Swiftfeather to finish speaking with her father, then began padding for the camp entrance, heading out into the desert. The sand was cooled now and Brittlepaw relished the feeling of it underpaw.



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Swiftfeather purred, "Don't you all like the feeling of the sand between your pads?"
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Sharpdawn nodded in response to Swiftfeather's question. She had more soft paw pads, so the night sand was much like the moist grass.
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[Yeah, true! Now, SilverClan meeting area is a river that marks the end of their territory (they are isolated from other Clans), and it's really just a normal river, except the ice on it (SilverClan snows year-round) shines like silver- hence the Clan name. Originally, it was going to be a snowy territory with rivers that striked all over it, that shone silver. What are your custom Clans like?]



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"Yeah, totally," Brittlepaw chirped, "A few spots in EveClan are sandy. It's so nice... I like to roll around in it in the early morning, when it's so cold." As night fell deeper, her energy levels were filling up, and she was tempted to go for a dustbath now, but she knew they had to keep good time.

Gulchclaw, meanwhile, didn't enjoy the sand as much as his travellers. "Rock's better for me," he added to their conversation. Growing up in ChasmClan, he had tough, calloused paws for climbing the canyon walls. In comparison, the sand underfoot here felt slippery and unstable.

(oooh i love the idea of them being named after the river ice!!! thats such a cool origin for a color-named clan. i have a few fanclans tbh, my most unique would be fieldclan, who live in an abandoned farm, so their territorys all overgrown cornfield)



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2020-10-22 23:58:10
[That's cool! Right now, there's some drama going on in SilverClan. I call SilverClan my Clan of Sadness because so many bad things happen lol. I call StarClan Valhalla, and the Dark Forest Hell. Each have kings/queens and tiers. The deputy, Sweetrose, was forced into Hell by the queen. Sweetrose set the Clan on fire, murdered her father, brother, other brother, sister, and an elder. Then, a molly named Mudpool came in and became medicine cat. She was pregnant and gave birth to five, and adopted another two. She's also in love with my character, the deputy. Her old husband came and tried to win her back and take her to their old Clan, but she refused. He allied with another cat, who got mad because his wife was having kids. Then, a human's pet comes along and joins them. They create a huge Clan-like group in a barn and are about to attack SilverClan, take Mudpool, cull the kittens that don't look like him, cull the second villain's kittens and take his wife, and just kill the rest of the Clan.
ANYWAYS I'll be responding later on in noon!]



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[oh, and Sweetrose is now the Queen of Hell oop-]



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(OH DAMN THAT IS DRAMATIC, love me so drama cats tho!!! i love the valhalla/hell system, them having ranks is really neat :0 also im such a sucker for "villain uses fire as a weapon", im writing an au that involves that right now actually haha. also yee imma respond tomorrow too - its 2am oof)



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"Here in BlazeClan, we've learned to adapt to the hot sands," Swiftfeather went on.
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Sharpdawn cooed, "Well, BlandClan have soft, squishy pads- some of us have large, flat paws to help us stay afloat on the sinking marsh. We could never adapt to hot sandy territories."
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[Thanks! In Valhalla, the rankings are Queen/King, High-Tier, Mid-Tier, Low-Tier (they rank from the wisest to the newest), and in Hell, the rankings are Queen/King, Elites, Mid-Tier, Servants, and Trainees! In Valhalla, they could have kittens, which were called Demi-Gods. But, in Hell, they could also have them, and they could either choose to stay or be born in the real world- if they stay, they turn into Illska, emotion-less black-shadow creatures that haunt the living. There is sooo much more to that, but it'd take so long to write it down again lol! I have a Google Doc just for the living and the dead.]



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Brittlepaw's ears perked as Sharpdawn spoke. "Your paws adapt to the marsh? That's amazing! I've heard of animals like that, but not cats, that's so cool." She trotted closer to the she-cat and eyed her paws, curiosity gleaming in her eyes. Gulchclaw smiled at the apprentice's eagerness.

(oooh demigods! also illska is SUCH a cool name i love that :0 i love unique warriors mythology sm... i wish the canon books expanded more on the inner workings of starclan, i hc the founders lead it but nobody really sees them around much. and i use docs too! :D )



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Sharpdawn smiled bashfully, "Yeah, I guess it is," she turned her head upwards to look at what was ahead of them- a small sapling was now in sight, but still far.
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[Thanks! I got that name from a random Norse dictionary, I have no memory of what it means, but probably "demon" or something lol. And yeah! I wish they did too. I also get bugged by how they just let a relationship happen so quickly without any reasoning whatsoever... Thunder fell in love with Star Flower in just a day, and suddenly told her all of their plans. Also, they never emphasize why they fell in love. Were they charming, supportive, what??
I use Documents for everything, I have about 26 for my role-plays, art, stories, and more!]



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"Definitely." Brittlepaw nodded in a distracted sort of way. She spent a few more moments looking at Sharpdawn, then redirected her eyes to the place up ahead. Silently, she sped up, getting into a fast trot - Gulchclaw followed her lead.

(yessss the relationship speed bugs me sm. im honestly not a huge fan of dotc because of it, i read sun trail but the treatment of shecats annoyed me too much to continue lol. wish gray wing & clear sky could be motivated by literally anything but a dead mate)



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Swiftfeather hardened her eyes against the soft wind as it blew some of the sand their way. She had to squint in order to see what was ahead.

Sharpdawn smiled, happy that they weren't very far. The sand nearly fazed her, since she had to face hard rains in monsoon season.
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[I have a bunch to say about DotC, actually. It's probably my favorite arc, because it felt like they upped their game with this one. Their vocabulary got better and unique, instead of using the same phrases and words over and over again. They made me cry, too. Through the first four arcs the most I would do is have my eyes burn or tear up, but bro I broke down during The First Battle, because it felt like I was there. I felt the regret of Clear Sky, and the sad and shocking aura.
But I do hate how inexperienced they are with romance, and the female side-characters were so bland while the male ones had their own personalities! I'm not asking for mature scenes with romance, I just want to know what made one character fall in love with the other- and I want it to happen over time. Also, all the side characters that are female have the same personality? They're all wise, motherly, and gentle. Each male side character gets their own personality... Lightning Tail is loyal and skeptical, Shaded Moss was calm and respectful, like what??]



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Brittlepaw blinked against the wind, but didn't mind it badly, since she'd experienced the odd sandstorm in EveClan territory. Gulchclaw shook his head and pawed at his eyes every few steps - the canyon was mostly rock, so it was rare to get sand to the face.

Soon enough, though, the cats paused, arrived at their destination. Before them stood a small hollow. Inside, there was a glimmering pool, the center of which held a tiny ironwood tree. The thing was only a couple tail-lengths tall, but it was lush with new growth, and shallow water ebbed around its thin trunk. Mysteriously, it had never grown higher than is, in all the long years of the Clans - Brittlepaw's eyes rounded with reverence for the holy spot.

(thats all fair! i havent read past book 1, so i couldnt say what the others are like, but ive heard lotsa people say its their favorite. i think id like it more if not for the female & romance problems, esp compared to other arcs)



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Swiftfeather shuffled her paws, not used to not knowing what to do. She dipped her paw into the pool, watching the shimmering waves rippling at the touch. Her whiskers quivered in curiosity, eyes focused on her reflection.
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[What's your favorite arc?]



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