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 achro addict / no longer activ (#184265) 
Interstellar View Forum Posts  Posted on 2022-12-04 01:02:28 |
UPDATE: This is a really old base (for me) so I will not be editing anymore - however PLEASE tell me what I did wrong on this base so I can make sure to fix things for future bases ahead of time! (Also because I lost the base file. I may remake it someday, since past me THANKFULLY added the color palette) ---- This is my first base, so any constructive criticism is appreciated! (please tell me how to fix what I did wrong, not JUST tell me what i did wrong) I was thinking this would be a good September applicator base, or a good NCL exclusive special base. It's nothing SUPER special, really, so it would go pretty well with the color themes for those two. Cream Countershaded Dark Special genetics Lined (no skin, no eyes)  Lineless  Sandy eyes, Cinder skin  Corrupted Patches  Please tell me why you don't support! I want feedback! Alternate name suggestions: -Wren (current) |
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achro addict / no longer activ (#184265)
Interstellar View Forum Posts Posted on 2022-12-04 01:08:42 |
Feedback (praise or criticism) is appreciated! Also would LOVE some more name suggestions, wren's kinda boring imo lol  0 players like this post! Like?Edited on 04/12/22 @ 01:09:05 by corvidkinnie (G1 Corrupt Pris) (#184265) |
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Ｍａｇｎｏｌ ａ (#402131) Usual View Forum Posts Posted on 2022-12-04 01:13:26 |
Support! I love natural colors. I would maybe lighten up the face a little bit so it doesn’t look muddy? The back almost looks like wings, tbh I would love to see you play more on that! I think that would look cool 0 players like this post! Like? |
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achro addict / no longer activ (#184265)
Interstellar View Forum Posts Posted on 2022-12-04 01:16:26 |
Ty Prison Mike! I'll get right on the face and see how it looks. And yeah, it's supposed to look like wings, so I'm glad that came across!! The wings of the bird I was referencing didn't have much detail, so I tried to add some by striping it into the underbelly. I'll see if I can do anything else. 0 players like this post! Like? |
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achro addict / no longer activ (#184265)
Interstellar View Forum Posts Posted on 2022-12-04 01:25:34 |
I'm not totally sure on this one (i do like the face edits, so I may implement those) but here's the edited version using Prison Mike's suggestions!  0 players like this post! Like? |
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🔥❄️TabbyBri ️🔥 (#430441) Special Snowflake View Forum Posts Posted on 2023-04-15 20:17:51 |
This is gorgeous! I love the shading and the colors. Perhaps darken the VERY tip of the nose bridge so that it emphasizes the other colors more? 0 players like this post! Like? |
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achro addict / no longer activ (#184265)
Interstellar View Forum Posts Posted on 2023-04-15 20:18:25 |
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🔥❄️TabbyBri ️🔥 (#430441) Special Snowflake View Forum Posts Posted on 2023-04-15 20:19:32 |
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Ajax (aka highlighter) (#402010) Toxic View Forum Posts Posted on 2023-04-16 16:58:50 |
Maybe lighten up the edges on the back? Like the outline of the 'wing' and maybe extend it longer/farther back to play into the wing shape. It looks really good either way! 0 players like this post! Like? |
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Elli (#431338)
View Forum Posts Posted on 2023-04-27 21:48:59 |
I like it! Especially the tail! Those two little lines just simply add something! 0 players like this post! Like? |
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