I'm trying again and I reaally wanna draw it on my own except with lioden's help of course.

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I have a better shape for the lioness

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It's improved quite a bit from the others! :D The back paw lines seem a little thin and long, and the front paw (where it's just coming off the body and going into the paw God I'm horrible at explaining things ), seems a little thick to me.

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you miiiiiiight be looking at the tail which is in front of the body this time.

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Nope! :3 I noticed that, ;D I, of course, might not be right, I know I'm not the best at anatomy either, and as where it's just lines so far it's harder to judge. It DOES look alot better this time though!

EDIT: perhaps thinner lines would be a good idea though. Might make coloring cleaner and match the style of LD more in the end.

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Ok i'll fix that and make the tail distinguishable

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it's hard to see the lineart with two linearts going on there. you should make a new layer and trace th lineart you want us to look at even if this is just sketches xP

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Would you like a little help with it? I can help you out with a sketch you can use or redline what you have if you'd like. No charge because I think the idea is quite cute.

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I may be able to help lineart if the sketch gets finalized. for this style you need REALLY thin lines

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This just where the lines will go in the end they will be erased.

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the neck/chest is too thick^^;

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