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Posted by | Roulette [Short story - trigger warning] |
these floral bones (#34213) Astral View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:20:24 |
Three AM. Two chairs. One table. A dark room. Shadows crouched in corners, waiting to strike. Two children. Twelve years of age. One strong, handsome, cruel. The other weak, thin, feral. Maniacal eyes gleaming. A single shotgun on the table. One bullet. One chance. No winner. Gently, she places her hand over it. He smirks. Grinning, fondly awaiting her death. Her eyes flicker away like fearful silver fish. "Maybe this time," she remarks. Puts it to her head. Finger cradling the trigger. Her hand contracts as her neck goes slack. "Dammit!" she hisses. Grimaces upward. Hands the gun to him. Watches keenly as he raises it to his temple. Grins once. Laughs as he snaps his fingers together. "Shit," he says. Tosses the gun to her. She catches it, swings it to her head. Leans back. Closes her eyes. Hopes. "One to grow on." Nothing. Tosses it back. Studies him. Pulls the trigger. Nothing. Tosses it back. Studies her. Two turns left. One bullet. One chance. No winners. 0 players like this post! Like? Edited on 02/03/15 by Casper (#34213) |
Adyllic (#44516)
Impeccable View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:23:45 |
these floral bones (#34213)
Astral View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:25:15 |
Well, that's what happens when my mom shoves pictures of moa feet in my face x3 Thanks though, it's exactly the feel I was going for. 0 players like this post! Like? |
🌳 Dad 🌳 (#22988)
View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:26:08 |
Adyllic (#44516)
Impeccable View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:26:37 |
Aslan'sLioness (#23605)
Impeccable View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:26:47 |
Very well written. I'm a writer myself, and I love the darkness in this. 0 players like this post! Like? |
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Incredible View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:26:56 |
I love it. Oh my goodness, this has inspired me! *runs off to go write more of my book* 0 players like this post! Like? |
Paramnesia (#5094)
Necromancer View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:27:12 |
That is quite eerie. I'm a writer as well, and can't wrap my head around writing creepy things. Ha. I'm just not very good at it, I guess. This is very well done, though. Only "criticism" I can give is that you wrote: "Once chance." in the second last line, and it should be "One chance." 0 players like this post! Like? Edited on 02/03/15 by Big Bad Mechanical Monstrosity (#5094) |
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Astral View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:29:48 |
Paramnesia (#5094)
Necromancer View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:30:39 |
Adyllic (#44516)
Impeccable View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:31:17 |
Thanks a lot, Casper. Now I've started a horror fic. And I swore when I started writing that I would not write anything with a drop of blood even mentioned in it. I lied. 0 players like this post! Like? |
these floral bones (#34213)
Astral View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:31:36 |
Autocorrect doesn't recognize autocorrect as a word on my phone. 0 players like this post! Like? Edited on 02/03/15 by Casper (#34213) |
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Impeccable View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:33:04 |
Poopy (Main) {Poo-Poo} (#12075) Indifferent View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:38:01 |
these floral bones (#34213)
Astral View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:39:45 |
I don't want to spoil it for anyone, but if you'd like I could message it to you. 0 players like this post! Like? |
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Impeccable View Forum Posts Posted on 2015-03-02 13:47:00 |
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