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2015-03-11 04:57:43
I Don't Usually Ask for Critique, But I Love this drawing Idea so Much. That I want it to be perfect before I start making the Line Art.

Please be Nice when Critiquing :)

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Edited on 12/03/15 by Furry (#36229)

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2015-03-11 04:57:59
If you're Curious on who this Character is. It is my OC Fawn. She is Meeting her Saluki Form which I just recently fell in love with.

Also It would be helpful if you guys can link me anatomy tips on Hooves and Paws cause I suck at them

BTW , This is just the Sketch so its a pretty rough looking thing haha



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2015-03-11 05:07:21
I think they look wonderful. Just one thing though a paw has four toes if you were going with realistic. But since they are mythical creatures correct? I think that three toes would be fine.



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2015-03-11 05:10:38
I cannot for the life of me draw another toe xD i have tried but it looks so weird to me. Im not really aimming for realistic. My style is pretty cartoony. But I just want like that legs, head, and body to look right o-o.

Fawn is a Deer/mixed with I have no idea how she got a long tail. But her other form (the dog) is saluki, minus the small antlers

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2015-03-11 05:13:19
I'm pretty good at paws. I can link you some images of deer hooves if that would help.

I'd say I could redline a few spots, but it's hard on traditional to redline it.



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2015-03-11 05:15:30
I would appreciate the links Motsumi!, Ill post a link of the line art when I line it digitally later on today if I feel like the sketch is nice x) :0 at least hopefully I get to it today.



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Posted on
2015-03-11 05:15:46
I'll do some quick red-linging, one moment.



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2015-03-11 05:17:32
I do okay with paws but I am mostly a realism portrait artist. But my main strength is eyes and face detail. So I am not the best person to as on paws and hooves and such.



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Posted on
2015-03-11 05:24:29
I think I'll take a shot at red-lining this :3



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2015-03-11 05:28:24
0SQS1mc.pngredline, changed up the legs and tails a little
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Since the other one is a saluki, would you like her to look more dog like or the way she does currently? She red more deer/dog hybrid than just dog, but if that is what you were going for then you did a great job :D



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Edited on 11/03/15 by ButtBoss (#51717)

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2015-03-11 05:34:02
Thank you to everyone who is red lining !!! I appreciate it soo so much.

@ButtBoss , you did amazing with the legs !! I really was having trouble with the other leg as you can tell from my eraser marks xD. I was trying to do what you did with her deer form (the legs in the back) but it looked crippled half the time so I tried avoiding it by extending it xD. It looks absolutely amazing thank you. And as for her dog form. I do try really hard to make her look more like a dog (: minus the antlers



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2015-03-11 05:44:30
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Made her more doggy by lengthening the muzzle, adding a stop, and defining the chest from her neck a little more.



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2015-03-11 05:50:35
Wow. That looks good. Mind if I as for some critque as well on one of my Wip's?



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2015-03-11 05:57:27
@Boss, Hmm hmm I see what you did there. I have a problem with making dog heads round and slope down. I really need to practice on that. She looks even more Saluki than before *-* . I'll be sure to give you a shout out on my DA for helping me on the Anatomy (:

@Shy, sure I don't mind (:



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2015-03-11 06:02:06
I only work on paper so I apologize for the quality


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2015-03-11 06:04:05
Shy, can you go on imgur an resize it :0?



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