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Whale Biologist 🐋 (#35355)

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2015-05-03 11:07:25

A year or so ago I practiced some TLK-style art. In hindsight, it was so terrible. Just, everytime I look back on my art, 80% of the time I am like 'why.. WHY did I think it looked good? XD'

Except dragons. All my dragons I still heart b/c they are gerjus.

A few weeks ago I drew a gorgeous cub, Azandica. I was so happy but I messed up the next boy I drew and I stopped, just saying 'meh'.

I've been half-ass trying to draw more TLK. Then, I struct gold with beautiful boy Mwana. I don't have any digital of him yet but I'm working on him traditional, first. Will definitely put him up here later!

I'm so excited I've wanted to do a TLK-style comic for a long time. It won't go anywhere near pride rock, b/c I cannot draw the actual disney characters well and I would change a lot, and no one would probably like my alterations.

But so far, I have this. CAUTION: if you ever want to read the comic in the future, don't read below XD

1. He will have 1 brother and 2 sisters. Ik it's uncommon for a lion to have 4 cubs and impossible for all 4 to survive, but seriously it's TLK and who knows I might kill someone off afterall lol

2. The main plot will be the delema of who will be heir. With {alegedly} 4 healthy cubs that could take the thrown, it would be a hard decision to make.

3. Their mother will die. Idk why I decided this would happen, but I suppose the father would break down after that, and some rash decisions would be made, etc. and that's where I loose my plot. I have no clue where to go on from there. I tend to think on things a lot and develop stories before they actually even get started, so I'm not just going to be diving in and get stuck; don't worry!

UPDATE: I drew Mwana as a lil' bitty cubbin and a little adol! :D +color! Yaaay!

Mwana{1st born cub}:
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Kifalme{King/Father}:
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Edited on 04/05/15 by Divided We Fall (#35355)

Toska (#19637)

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2015-05-03 11:47:22
How about famine, drought, or poaching? One of the cubs could be the favorite of the father, and be killed by another cub for power? Two cubs could team up to rule the throne together, exile the rest, and them turn on eachother?



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Whale Biologist 🐋 (#35355)

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2015-05-03 12:14:47

Hmm I like the poaching idea. It would add more meaning to the story :) although it seems a bit dark to have them kill each other. Might be a way to toss out potential heirs, though.




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🏹Naga TWS (#54942)

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2015-05-03 14:16:15
looks nice. Ive been wanting to do a comic also, but my inability to do backgrounds has stopped me :/ I like to write too, and I like your idea. Would you be looking for a partner in creating your comic?



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2015-05-03 14:17:47
Hey I'm starting a comic soon too! Lets be comic buddies! :3



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Toska (#19637)

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2015-05-03 15:13:15
The mother could be poached?

I would also take into account your targeted age group before you deside on the plot line and mature themes.



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2015-05-03 16:11:13
also If she's going to die What about lion er feline pneumonia? She could get it a little bit after the cubs are born so that they are old enough to remember how she is and a bit of what she was like before she dies?



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Valentine [Main] (#34494)

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2015-05-03 16:19:26
Oh, he looks amazing.



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Tortuga (#54751)

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2015-05-03 16:28:18
I just have to say I am IN LOVE with that top left headshot. I look forward to seeing your comic progress! It'll be great!



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Whale Biologist 🐋 (#35355)

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2015-05-03 22:36:20

@Naga maybe! :o a partner sounds fun! Either way I'd likely consult Lioden for things anyways haha I'm not perfect w/ backgrounds either, but I've been working on my art a lot so I'm only getting better XD

@Astera -comicmakers unite!- I'll look into feline pneumonia. It would help pull poor daddy apart, making him watch his queen die.

@Toska oh yes, I need to do that >-> *so much thinking right now*

And thanks everybody for the compliments! I'm in love with him, too. ik I drew him intensely crying in the last head shot on purpose but I seriously want to give poor Mwana a hug ;w;




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2015-05-04 08:14:03

I updated Mwana's pictures! Plus his daddy's pics are on the way! This makes me so excited. I'm glad I'm doing so well.




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😸 Chonk 😸 (#54568)

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2015-05-04 15:33:38
maybe one of the daddys kids from another lioness (if you want to get into the whole king siring all the cubs in the pride thing) kills the queen at his mothers request? Since she could be jealous of the queen or want to be queen.



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2015-05-04 15:37:35
That's a good idea Naga. Lots of drama to work with there, and definitely good motive and reason for why she dies.

@Div - the coloured and new pics are great! Mwana is a handsome boy, I really like his colours. And I really like Kifalme too. :D



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Whale Biologist 🐋 (#35355)

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2015-05-05 06:17:01

Oh Naga that's a really great idea! :D Hmm I had everything around her being sick, though XD I shall rip people apart by having the queen and mother get sick, then she will get really bad, near to death. Cut away for a bit, show the lioness telling her daughter yada yada, and the queen will start to improve. yay, maybe there's hope queen will live!? NOPE she coughs so hard she passes out and little girly comes and finishes the job~

I'm such a happy little writer! lol so obviously this is going to be a more mature-rated comic...

Ty, Tortie ^^




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Edited on 05/05/15 by Divided We Fall (#35355)

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2015-05-05 06:26:44
The poaching sounds really close to my OC's storyline. Both of her parents were poached when she was a year old.

But I have to redo her comic and have nowhere to upload it. But other than that, it sounds like a good idea. I like the illness idea though.



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😸 Chonk 😸 (#54568)

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2015-05-05 09:15:35
well, she could be sick from being slowly poisioned xD



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