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2017-01-28 06:18:12

RAFFLE IS NOW CLOSED

1486068988982_by_sabertoothassassin-daxnA Plague is Upon Us
The Devil has a new best buddy.
www_gifcreator_me_3uity4__2__by_sabertoo

Hello friends
It took me knocking a huge bump on my head and a day off from work to gain my art muse back.
That gif maker I used distorted the image.
Grrrrrrrrrrrrr
I've grown bored with my old adoptables. I want something new.
Something people would like.
Thus, I brought a Plague to Lioden.
Cuss me if you wish, but it doesn't seem to be going anywhere soon.
If anything, I think it's evolving.

Latest update!
1487315000245_by_sabertoothassassin-dazcAbout The Plague
If I do decide to make these an adoptable, they will have the full adoptable experience.
*Update- I am making a weebly for these!
That means breeding, stages, gender poses, Mutations, the whole run.
Problem is, I think I could do better.
I don't really know what else to add.
I thought about maybe a second head.
Or two tails.
Maybe a glow.
It's just a big WIP!
Here's where you come in.


I Need Your Help - Raffle Is Closed
Please, for the love of everything that's good, fill out this form!

•What do you like about them?:
•What do you dislike?:
•PLEASE list one idea you'd like added to the base animal:
•More than anything I need ideas for the base. Any 2nd ideas?:
•How should Males & Females differ?:
•Anything you'd like to see removed?:
•How much would you pay for a simple one?:
•How much would you pay for a complex one?:
•How much for a custom?:
•Any traits you'd like to see incorporated into the species info?:
•Do you imagine them more like a feral beast, or a demon?:
•Why do you imagine this?:
•Overall, good or bad concept?:
•Would you like to be added to a free raffle for the first male OR 1gb?:
•Final comment:


That's right. If you like the species enough, just say yes or no!
You have the chance to be added to a free raffle.
Raffle Slots in post 2
Your choice of the first Plague dog or 1gb!

BTW, if you provide information I like, credit will be given where it's due!
If any information I particularly like is given, you could win a custom too!
I also may be recruiting another artist to aid me, put it in your form if you're interested!
It's going to be a while before I regularly start producing these.
But, let this be the start of the plague.
I still have to flesh out every detail about them.
The how's and why's of what makes them function.
Make them unique.
For now I say goodbye and thanks!


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Bored scribbles


Assassin Out



FAQ
•Horns & spines WILL be added, mostly as variants to the species, not Mutations.
•Tail, ears, muscle, fur, claws, and a few more features will be subject to Mutation.
•Habitat is still a WIP, though I've teamed up with Pandora Paradox (#89006) to help me. Their reply is the very first one on the thread. They went deep into detail, and I loved the idea and plan on using it as a base.
•The face is well. Indeed a face, no mask. It has a beak, and doesn't particularly have "eyes".
•I'm shooting for conflicting. This species isn't meant to resemble a cat or a dog, in fact I've been looking at horse pictures for referencing.
•Body build wise, it's not an "unhealthy" creature just because it's ribs protrude. It's the way it's built. Lean, mean and muscular. •Think of how even with a fat healthy cow the hip bones often stick up.
•Big heart, massive lungs, muscular legs, lean body, long tail. It's for running!
•The black/white plague is still very flat, it's just the latest thing I've worked on.
•I'm going for different. I don't want a mutated mutt. No wacky cats. No weird wolf. I wanted a plague!

THINGS I KNOW NEED FIXING
Raptor claws (dewclaws)
Front legs
A few lineart quirks
Ears?
Head
Tail




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Edited on 04/04/17 @ 17:54:56 by Assassin 🔫 The Misanthrope (#23905)

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Posted on
2017-01-29 13:38:23
Thank you so much!

Also, thanks for explaining the way you have, it makes sence in a way that gives me pointers on how to fix it, not just what needs fixing. I'll be doodling around with the base alot in the next few days. The head and the legs are my top priorities!



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Revy (#50811)

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Posted on
2017-01-31 05:22:42
Just thinking out loud here:

Shorter beaks, long beaks, more curved beaks, as well as different mask colorations like the old plague masks.
Different ear variations
Manes of hair that could run from the top of head all the way down to neck, back, or all the way to the tail.
Tail hair OR something at the end of the tail, such as the wings and hour glass at the end of Plague Doctor canes.
The wing and hour glass could also appear as decor on the body, such as natural markings, necklaces, tattoos, or strap on wings.
horns could be added as a mutation or a rarity or sorts. Different horns could be used
Eye colors-- irises and pupils could be added, but other variations could have black voidless or white voidless eyes

I'd actually REALLY like to help out with this project. I find the concept inspiring and I've already got so many ideas to help get you started as far as designs go



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Megaabsol5 [SIDE] (#103006)

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Posted on
2017-01-31 09:43:04
•What do you like about them?: Muscled legs, dewclaws, mask
•What do you dislike?: A lot of empty space near the top and back, drawing most attention to the paws/legs, I feel it would be more fitting to draw the attention more to the head, or just spread out the details.
•List one thing you'd like added to the base animal: Protruding ribs, maybe protruding spine? If not the protruding spine, then maybe spines running from the top of the head, just before the ears, to the tip of the tail? Maybe a more bladelike appearance at the end of the tail?
•Anything you'd like to see removed?: Nope
•How much would you pay for a simple one?: 250-700 SB
•How much would you pay for a complex one?: 2-5 GB
•How much for a custom?: 5-10 GB, depending on the type of customizations available
•Any traits you'd like to see incorporated into the species info?: Nope
•Do you imagine them more like a feral beast, or a demon?: Feral Beast
•Why do you imagine this?: I just can't imagine it as a demon.
•Overall, good or bad concept?: Amazing concept and overall design!
•Would you like to be added to a free raffle for the first male OR 1gb?: Yes, please.
•Final comment: As for mutations, I was thinking of having rarities of mutations? Such as two heads or wings being Very Rare, and mutations such as two tails being Common? And in the middle somewhere, maybe Uncommon, would be mutations such as the glow some of the others spoke of or horns? Overall, I love the idea of this species and I will be paying very close attention for when they are a thing, love them!



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Posted on
2017-01-31 13:57:32
Thanks guys!

I've got a ton of ideas too Revy, I'm not lacking there much xD
Right now I'm just trying to get opinions on how to make the base better, it still looks very wonky to me. Like there's not enough originality put into the basic form of the species.
I just don't know what else to add I plan on making these a full-on thing but. I want the base better.

Thanks again, all of you, every person so far has said something that could help me improve!



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Mayonayys (#68948)

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Posted on
2017-02-02 08:21:53
Bookmarking! Really like these guys, ill fill out the form whenever i get off of work!



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Assassin {G2 1000+
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Posted on
2017-02-02 08:28:37
Thank you!



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Astaroth (#54882)

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Posted on
2017-02-02 09:18:46
•What do you like about them?:
I've always been a fan of macabre art like this, and I think the species is overall very very aesthetically pleasing!

•What do you dislike?:
I personally dislike the ear shape, but that's just personal opinions

•PLEASE list one idea you'd like added to the base animal:
Possibly spines along the spine and tail?

•More than anything I need ideas for the base. Any 2nd ideas?:
Not really, sorry ^^;

•Anything you'd like to see removed?:
Nope!

•How much would you pay for a simple one?:
1-5 GB

•How much would you pay for a complex one?:
5-15 GB

•How much for a custom?:
10 GB

•Any traits you'd like to see incorporated into the species info?:
Not that I can think of, sorry!

•Do you imagine them more like a feral beast, or a demon?:
When I think of this creature I think it's possible for some to be feral monsters, who only kill to satisfy their instincts, and some whom are cursed to walk the earth as hellhounds
But then again I'm odd

•Why do you imagine this?:
Not really sure

•Overall, good or bad concept?:
Very good!

•Would you like to be added to a free raffle for the first male OR 1gb?:
First Male <3

•Final comment:
W A N T

But seriously, this is a species I'd adore to take part in and do art for. If this was a species irl I'd definitely own one as a pet! Amazing concept so far, I think this species will really go places!



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Posted on
2017-02-02 09:57:35
Such encouraging words! Thank you!
I may be recruiting another artist to help me out, I'll give you a pm if I decide!
I hadn't really thought of editing the ears, but I think that would be another great aspect to make subject to Mutations.

As an update, I will be making a weebly for this!



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2017-02-02 11:31:56
What do you like about them?: they are odd and unique looking

•What do you dislike?: i just think antomy need tweking slightly

•PLEASE list one idea you'd like added to the base animal: wings for mabye a legendary or rare.

•More than anything I need ideas for the base. Any 2nd ideas?: maybe manes or fur in the tails again a rare trait maybe a mutation

•Anything you'd like to see removed?: no as its super cool looking :)

•How much would you pay for a simple one?: simple id say 3-4gb

•How much would you pay for a complex one?: 5-6gb

•How much for a custom?: 10gb maybe more depending on complexaty

•Any traits you'd like to see incorporated into the species info?: nope :)

•Do you imagine them more like a feral beast, or a demon?: both

•Why do you imagine this?: i can see theferal die to the base and demon due to the added demonic features

•Overall, good or bad concept?: amazing concept

•Would you like to be added to a free raffle for the first male OR 1gb?: the male please :)

•Final comment: please pm me once they are avalible



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Posted on
2017-02-02 11:56:15
Thank you so much!
Is there a specific part of the lineart you can help me pinpoint to fix?
I will be sure to let you know when they're available!



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Onyxius(DM me the
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Posted on
2017-02-02 12:00:08
I think maybe the neck is a little to defined, the heads to small for such a musculiar neck :)



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Posted on
2017-02-02 12:36:42
So do you think a larger head would fix the problem, or does the neck need adjusting too?

This is why I made this thread, to better the base animal! Thank you, thanks everyone!



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Onyxius(DM me the
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Posted on
2017-02-02 12:38:12
Maybe slim the neck and bulk the head slightly



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Posted on
2017-02-02 12:40:22
Ok!

I'm actually going to edit now, I'll be updating soon~



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Posted on
2017-02-02 12:45:02
:) cool imma stalk this



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