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Unnamed_Raven (#243915)

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Posted on
2022-01-03 00:47:23
Hello! I will write your lion’s bio- or whatever else you would like!
I accept items and event currencies too! Please ask about them though!

(I price 1 GB at 900 SB. This will not be changed.)
Feel free to leave reviews!!!

Extra Short Bio- 600 SB
Example:


Short Bio- 1 GB or 900 SB
Example:


Medium Bio- 4 GB or 3600 SB
Example:


Long Bio- 10 GB or 9000 SB
Example:


Extra Long Bio- 15 GB or 13500 SB
This might not always be available, please ask! <3


If you have opinions on my prices you can just tell me. ^^



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Edited on 17/06/23 @ 03:48:18 by Unnamed_Raven (#243915)

🍑PeachySonder🍑 (#295422)

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Posted on
2022-10-04 05:33:33
Thank you so much, this is great!! I cant recall if I paid or not?



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the prosecutor  (#346684)

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Posted on
2022-10-04 05:39:42
could i have a very short bio for https://www.lioden.com/lion.php?mid=346684



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Unnamed_Raven (#243915)

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Posted on
2022-10-04 06:04:07
@Inksplosh
Nope, I haven’t received payment yet!

@ren
Your king? Alright, any details?
Oh, and also, did you mean to misspell Arrogance? Just need to know if I need to turn off my autocorrect lol~



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the prosecutor  (#346684)

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2022-10-04 06:37:47
complete artistic creativity and I did not meant to misspell it but i was half asleep making the acc lol. i'm actually fixing to change it to the correct spelling



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the prosecutor  (#346684)

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Posted on
2022-10-04 06:50:01
changed his name to Alcazar



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Unnamed_Raven (#243915)

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Posted on
2022-10-04 16:05:06
Alright, gotcha! I’ll use that name ^^



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Unnamed_Raven (#243915)

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Posted on
2022-10-11 23:38:17
@the prosecutor
I’m done with your commission :) Just tell me if there’s anything you want changed! You can use it once you pay!

A small, adolescent male.
A golden-brown pelt.
So many teeth.
Too many teeth.
Monstrous.
Cowering in front of a huge crowd of judging faces.
“Please,” the lion begged, looking around at the pride. His eyes were panicked and his breaths came quickly. “Y-you know I’m not a monster! I can’t help being this way, I was born like this! You can’t do this… you can’t leave me here! Please…”
A harsh, cold silence followed, biting at Alcazar’s heart like a winter wind.
“You don’t belong here,” the king snarled at him, getting closer. “You’re a monster, and you will never belong here.”
Alcazar whimpered and pressed back, glancing behind him and back at the king.
Suddenly, before he could react, a mass of fur flashed across his vision, claws aimed straight at his eyes.
A terrifying, roaring face.
The last thing Alcazar would ever see.
Pain shot through his whole body.
His vision went red.
He couldn’t see.
Stumbling to the side, Alcazar roared in pain and curled into a tight ball, cradling his face.
His ears rang.
He was going to die.
Everything went black.

———

Alcazar snarled as he tightened the blindfold around his face.
Today was the day.
He’d show them all.
He was going to get his revenge.
Alcazar’s three rows of teeth clacked against each other ominously as he began to walk towards his former pride’s territory.
His ears pricked up; he could hear the murmurs of conversation and the gentle footsteps of lionesses nearby.
The scent clearly marked it as his target; there was no escape this time.
“Arrogance,” his deep voice growled, echoing across the whole territory. Alcazar heard all conversation come to a sudden stop as a silence spread through the crowd.
“You!” The king hissed. He was about ten paces away, Alcazar could tell, through the sound his footsteps made.
“Yep,” he said with a smirk. “It’s me.”
He took a single, menacing step.
“Thought I’d never come back, huh? Though I’d just move on, forget about it. Forget all about this. What you did to me.” He said threateningly. “I am back, though. And I’m here to kill you.”
Another step.
Seven paces.
Then five.
Three.
Two.
One.
Alcazar sprang forward, sinking his rows and rows of teeth into the king’s neck.
Arrogance let out a scream and tried to claw him back, but his hold was too tight. A moment later, Alcazar shook the body in his grip and let go, his monstrous teeth stained bright red.
“I am your new king,” he snarled at the lionesses as they cowered just as he had, a lifetime ago. He glared at them for a moment, enjoying the fear he saw on their faces. “This place,” he whispered with a frightful smile, “this place will be a lot different from now on.”

———

Alcazar stared down at his paws, unmoving. He hated that he couldn't see them. His own paws.
He hated what they’d done to him.
Anger burned inside him, a blazing wildfire kindled from a single spark.
He stood and stormed out of his den— and immediately crashed into something. He snarled at it, and it let out a yelp.
“S-sorry,” the lioness whispered. “Your majesty! Your majesty,” she quickly added, and Alcazar could hear the terror in her voice.
He frowned.
Her voice… it was so familiar.
“What’s your name?” he asked her.
He heard the rustling of fabric as she turned away, and then back at him.
“V-voodoo,” she said, sounding embarrassed.
“Child!” Alcazar yelped, his face opening up into a genuine grin. “I missed you!”
More rustling.
“Y-you did?” she asked, sounding surprised. “I thought… I thought you hated me.”
Alcazar’s head drooped.
“I’m sorry,” he whispered, placing his paw on hers. He gently touched her blindfold. He knew, from seeing it in the past, that is was a calm, beautiful pink-purple. He wondered if his own blindfold was really gold, as he’d been told. “I understand what it’s like now.”
She pulled away from him.
“Alcazar, I…” she hesitated.
“What?” he asked gently, pulling her back. “What’s wrong?”
“You’re not the same,” she whispered. “You’re not the Alcazar I knew.” She turned away, lingering for only a moment before pushing him away. “You’ve… you’ve turned into something different.” He felt her wince. “A… a monster.”
Alcazar stumbled back, shocked.
“Monster?” he snarled, grabbing her wrist. “You’re wrong. I’m not a monster. I’m going to lead this pride on a bright path to a bright future. Why can’t you just cooperate?”
“Maybe this was always a part of you,” she whispered, ignoring him. “Maybe you were just… born this way.”
Alcazar’s face burned in anger.
“How dare you?” he shouted, his claws digging into her wrist. “I did all this for you! For this pride…”
“No you didn’t,” she replied. “You did it for yourself. You wanted revenge.”
Alcazar shoved her away.
“Get out of here,” he snarled. “I’m not listening to your whining.”
He heard her frantic footsteps as she gathered herself up and fled.
I’M NOT A MONSTER.

———

Alcazar lay still, sleepless. Voodoo Child’s words spun around in his head.
You’ve become a monster.
You did this for revenge.
I’m not, I’m not a monster!
You’re not the same.
He stood, unable to stay still any longer.
“Child?” he whispered, poking his head into her sleeping area. She looked up, rubbing her eyes. Her veil left discarded in the corner, she tilted her head at him, staring blankly at him through milky white eyes. “I-I’m sorry. I’ll be better.” His blindfold slipped off of his face and he smiled awkwardly. “I’ll be a good king, I promise.”
She smiled, standing up to touch his nose with hers.
“You will be,” she murmured.
Alcazar smiled, finally finding a place to rest. His heart calmed, and he let himself relax.
“Thank you.”



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🍑PeachySonder🍑 (#295422)

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Posted on
2022-10-15 13:39:58
Hello! Can I get three short bios for my lions? https://www.lioden.com/lion.php?id=794173132019
https://www.lioden.com/lion.php?id=794172927751
https://www.lioden.com/lion.php?id=794172604562



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Unnamed_Raven (#243915)

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Posted on
2022-10-15 16:50:28
Alright! Any details? :)



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🍑PeachySonder🍑 (#295422)

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Posted on
2022-10-15 16:56:39
Nope! Full artistic liberty :)



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mysoul_corazó
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Posted on
2022-10-15 17:28:01
guess what :3
I know u have a bit of a list so genuinely i Do Not Mind waiting LOL take ur time

could i get a long bio for my current king ? ill explain details in dms bc i do have a vague idea but i dont wanna spam ur post AGSGVSV
( ill also have to pay in sb this time )



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Unnamed_Raven (#243915)

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Posted on
2022-10-15 17:49:39
Alright!! Lemme just find my list rn…
Okay three people, I think?
1. Trigger G3/Broken/MR/MS (#166601)
2. Inksplosh (#295422)
3. ψ Max ψ (#217680)

Feel free to dm me :)



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Unnamed_Raven (#243915)

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Posted on
2022-10-23 23:54:28
@Inksplosh I’m finally done! :D

Zepka


Kalan



Quarna



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Unnamed_Raven (#243915)

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Posted on
2022-10-24 00:03:18
Hello! I was looking at my prices and my lengths, and it seems like I haven’t been able to write short things recently ;-;
Would everyone still buy them if I removed the ‘short bio’ and increased prices on the others? I might close comms for a while to update if so!
Your opinions are very important to me ^^



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mysoul_corazó
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Posted on
2022-10-24 03:51:41
i personally tend to stick to the longer ones , but i would 100% be alright w/ a price increase !



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